poemranker ::20 most recent comments by pete (41-60) and replies

Comments bypete, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on View From The Gutter by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:38 AM
yesterday's primordial soup ... luvvitt ! too many words though (imho)
on Empty by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:34 AM
explanation will often ruin a poem, i know, but is this about an alcoholic suicide or lonesome solitude .... or something else entirely
on Llamas by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:27 AM
slide your new tongue.... nice ...teach me etc .. is this a matchstick page wandering muttering into the surreal landscape
on The Finding by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:23 AM
reads like a wordsmith's musing on an empty-minded sunny sunday afternoon;... will search later for hidden depths, should there be any
on Paper Maker by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:18 AM
yeah, the preposition thing..... found it a bit hard going but was rewarded by the clarity of the final image .... stinging just the same
on The Search by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:10 AM
i felt the 2nd half lacked enough concrete images to hold it together ..... yeah, i did get a bit lost
on Bonded by Skamper 14 Jun 2007, 5:46 PM
wow...lol...catcha later
on The Sunnyside of David Uden by lukehanney 7 May 2007, 4:50 PM
clunky
on Castle of Pandas IV by FreeFormFixation 7 May 2007, 4:48 PM
string band school of creative writing seems like
on again it happnes by skaskowski 7 May 2007, 4:45 PM
... yeah but whats it all mean? and is it Art? :-/... yes I'm sure it is :-)
on Worn Ruse by drnick 7 May 2007, 4:35 PM
fabulous concept not done full justice by this poem
on Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar 7 May 2007, 4:32 PM
the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)
on The Emperor's new clothes by thetrev 7 May 2007, 4:27 PM
cutting edge improvisational phrasing with retro hip-hop under and overtones
on requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void 7 May 2007, 4:11 PM
... cheer up; can't be that bad!
on Final Moon by Caducus 7 May 2007, 4:02 PM
kinda nice
on Altitude by half.italian 7 May 2007, 3:56 PM
an unwinding coil, eh? ... wassat? helium whispers is nice
on Snow by MacFrantic 7 May 2007, 3:48 PM
poweful opening swooned into greeting-card land
on LOVES ME NOT~NOBM by Radiation 1 Feb 2007, 6:19 AM
take no notice, you can only get better; this is far superior to your earlier effort
on Instruction by Dovina 26 Nov 2006, 5:49 PM
"were future world so kind" perhaps? :).....aaahh i see, a sense-timing paradox thing ... nice
on weather poem part 1: the wolf journal by nypoet22 21 Oct 2006, 7:02 AM
well; got blown away by this; took it slow and let it speak to me , then saw all this sour-face bitchin and wondered what that was all about. in some of us poetry is a continuum and it being broken up in chunks merely a convention ( sez he pompously)... anyhow, 8 for now and will return to it later