poemranker ::20 most recent comments by pete (61-80) and replies

Comments bypete, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Work by half.italian 21 Oct 2006, 6:48 AM
lol :)
on connect the dots by daniella 21 Oct 2006, 6:43 AM
I looked at the site and watched the whole film and would recommend any others to do the same; i think this counts as a bit more than a political statement; 10 for the lead 6 for the poem
on snot by fattony 11 Oct 2006, 1:55 PM
started out as yet another edna yet the final line shows a true poetic sensibility ... what else ya got, dude ?
on The Mandarin by Caducus 11 Oct 2006, 1:47 PM
when i'm loving, yet never when i fuck ... yeah, that's nice , the 2 fucks work i think, but how about when you fuck while you're loving ... freud would probably have a ball here...what with dad and all .. :)
on Wyndham by Aetius 2 Oct 2006, 3:54 PM
works well as a childs poem and i quite liked it; but if you're not here for comments or votes may i enquire why you are here?
on "Twee" by Ranger 2 Oct 2006, 3:35 PM
multilayered bit of fun...is it deep....is it ironic ...surely not cynical... a comment on the human condition or aspiration...i give up... enjoyed reading it though :)
on untitled by harryparatestes 2 Oct 2006, 3:28 PM
not that i'm into angels but it would have worked better for me with " angels on every breeze..." ... also "opportunities" .... nit-picking i know but that's what we're here for... nice poem :)
replying on if really its me by Landon2 21 Sep 2006, 5:31 PM
sorry, that score should read a 6
on if really its me by Landon2 21 Sep 2006, 5:30 PM
know the feeling :)! ... reads like it should be spoken over beats. If not, i'd introduce more rests and split some lines into 2 or 3 .....
on Soup Can by oneglove 21 Sep 2006, 5:17 PM
my sense of perspective and viewpoint got scrambled between verses 3 and 4; chilling finale and knockout opening... not conviced by self-rhyme of along, though...v3 seems a little clumsy
on Weather poem part 6: idols by nypoet22 21 Sep 2006, 4:58 PM
..... and the best part by far so far imho
replying on Flea poem by Sing4Jesus! 20 Sep 2006, 7:50 PM
damn freud with his ego-system
small minds inhabit large legends
on Upon meeting Mrs Gunn at the Butchers by Mr Pig 16 Sep 2006, 9:43 AM
curate's egg
on Flea poem by Sing4Jesus! 16 Sep 2006, 9:41 AM
not good;either you really are fulla shit or are trying to overcome a strict christian upbringing, in which case respect, but it has all been done already...mainly in school toilets
replying on When I look inside my heart by Engelbert Humpalot 16 Sep 2006, 9:35 AM
not at all
on To be alive by nightowl 16 Sep 2006, 9:34 AM
nice thought, shame about the words
on Jose Streets by SupremeDreamer 16 Sep 2006, 9:30 AM
maybe needs reworking? definitely a story worth the telling, but didn't flow for me... started off fizzing
on don't touch me 2 by elderking 16 Sep 2006, 9:23 AM
the last line needs working on i think ..it does lighten the intensity but is that intentional? does she want to touch him? or was he way out of order?
on Morning Glory by moyah8 16 Sep 2006, 9:08 AM
mmhh...not good, but i like the idea of trailing of into a(prose)observation after being constrained by rhyme ... the lines could be condensed for better flow
on When I look inside my heart by Engelbert Humpalot 8 Sep 2006, 8:02 AM
made me laugh i'm ashamed to admit ....