on Love Till the End by swat472
14 Sep 2002, 2:22 AM
a bit greetings cardy .... heart's in almost the right place though , i think ..... 3
on America the Beautiful? by pink_punk_kisses87
14 Sep 2002, 2:12 AM
from my perspective it's killing the indians ... sorry , native americans .. that made part of the americas great .... 3
on america's promise by dylansong
14 Sep 2002, 2:03 AM
A Un painted park bench .... is this a typo or politically subtle ? and are people a pain to the promise or visa versa ? too staccato for me but i live outside the promise and only live with the threat ..... 4
on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass
14 Sep 2002, 1:54 AM
there's a lot of it about ; i'm surprised you were surprised . nice pome though ... no need to emphasise your non-gayness methinks ... 5
on Satisfaction by Ojiboch
14 Sep 2002, 1:19 AM
when you get there there's no there there ( D Parker i think) the old human condition again ... 5
on Full Fathom Five by vulcan
14 Sep 2002, 1:16 AM
what crap , one thinks at the start .... then balloons beating bashfully reinforce blueness to grab attention .. and then superior literary knowledge demands more respect ... an interesting acceptance curve ... is nuisant from nuisance or of the night ? .... could i suggest use of (i think ) subjunctive ... were it not for S's sake .... 6
on A Man Of The World by vulcan
14 Sep 2002, 12:58 AM
:-) ..... 5
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
14 Sep 2002, 12:45 AM
;-D for the ps . no vote
on Persephone by Lynn
14 Sep 2002, 12:35 AM
bloody 'ell ! .... that woke me up ... 7
on Lonely by xblackstarsx
14 Sep 2002, 12:23 AM
that'as what friends are for ..... a good cry is great but self pity in a poem doesn't do it .. 3
on Im different so what? by xblackstarsx
14 Sep 2002, 12:20 AM
wouldn't worry about them ..... fuck 'em ! ...... 4
on Raining in Dream by memorybabe
14 Sep 2002, 12:18 AM
sounds like its chock-full of meaning ..... couple of typos ( ? ) stop me searching for it ..... 4
on Babys Got Blue Eyes by w~* ATHENA *~w
14 Sep 2002, 12:12 AM
:-) ...... 4
on Spellbound by Limness
14 Sep 2002, 12:01 AM
Gold will tell others the words we have said ..... no comprendo .... the rest has definitely got something , shows feeling and thought ..... your feline escort is plural , is that condensed into your one lover ? ... 6
on A Man Of The World by vulcan
13 Sep 2002, 11:49 PM
sounds like you woke from a nice dream to a nasty reality .... would have worked better for me if fairy fiddle and gate were on separate lines as then killing the gate would have had more impact ..... 4