on Jeff by OneFingerAnswer
11 Sep 2002, 12:49 PM
hmm?
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 12:55 PM
Seus is always a favorite.
on No other limericks? by gothwalk
11 Sep 2002, 12:41 PM
:blink: whafuck? :)
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 12:44 PM
nice tribute poem, but no thanks.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 12:46 PM
"and so her did I" :rofl: (lol/asl/wtf!?)
on What R U? by Sigh'ense...
11 Sep 2002, 12:50 PM
a good last stanza. everything else read a bit awkwardly; I think I'd like it as just the last.
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 12:44 PM
when you read this, do you rhyme "glass" with "ass" with "Lass", or "glarz" with "arz" with "Larz", or...?
on Waiting for the Doctor by GAC
11 Sep 2002, 12:53 PM
decent if overly simplistic.
the "age-ins" doesn't seem to go with the rest of the poem's presentation.
the "age-ins" doesn't seem to go with the rest of the poem's presentation.
on Ode to Poem Ranker by Lenore
11 Sep 2002, 12:54 PM
aw, that's really sweet. :) shucks. :)
on La tasse de vie by keatsImnot
11 Sep 2002, 12:56 PM
short/naught?
why the allcaps?
why the allcaps?
on Seen from a train by aliena
11 Sep 2002, 12:57 PM
a nice ending to the poem. I really didn't like "The Unknown Infinity". s2 and s3 felt to me like they could use some work.
on the rose by keatsImnot
11 Sep 2002, 12:58 PM
I hate roses. (suiters -> suitors).
a decent poem, though.
a decent poem, though.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 12:59 PM
I read this once a long time ago. I like it, today. I don't think I did then. I must be in an oddly good mood.
on Cow Do by http://David Bowman
11 Sep 2002, 1:00 PM
hilarious but wrong, oh so wrong. :)
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 1:04 PM
DA and GW, kissing in a tree, s. i. t. t. i. n. g.!!!
on Three Daughters by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 1:09 PM
dude! that's really fucking beautiful. I'm not one to read through a long poem, generally, but damn. :) thank you. Sure, it's a bit overdone, and there are a few awkward scanning bits, but it's really fucking well done. (I recommend you try to publish it somewhere... nfg.ca would probably take it...)
on Cadbury Avenue by Takay Shitar
11 Sep 2002, 12:47 PM
ehh?
on Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 12:42 PM
doesn't quite fit the form, but it's cute.