poemranker ::20 most recent comments by nentwined (661-680)

Comments bynentwined, 661–680 back. Include replies

on Jeff by OneFingerAnswer 11 Sep 2002, 12:49 PM
hmm?
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11 Sep 2002, 12:55 PM
Seus is always a favorite.
on want it by sontei 11 Sep 2002, 1:05 PM
"for every day of my life" doesn't scan right. and what's up with rhyming "arse" with "ass"?
on No other limericks? by gothwalk 11 Sep 2002, 12:41 PM
:blink: whafuck? :)
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 12:44 PM
nice tribute poem, but no thanks.
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 12:46 PM
"and so her did I" :rofl: (lol/asl/wtf!?)
on What R U? by Sigh'ense... 11 Sep 2002, 12:50 PM
a good last stanza. everything else read a bit awkwardly; I think I'd like it as just the last.
on Life's Great Irony by Tascobar 11 Sep 2002, 12:41 PM
eh. not a limerick. I need to set up something to deal with these cases. If I want to look at limericks, I want to look at limericks...
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11 Sep 2002, 12:44 PM
when you read this, do you rhyme "glass" with "ass" with "Lass", or "glarz" with "arz" with "Larz", or...?
on Waiting for the Doctor by GAC 11 Sep 2002, 12:53 PM
decent if overly simplistic.

the "age-ins" doesn't seem to go with the rest of the poem's presentation.
on Ode to Poem Ranker by Lenore 11 Sep 2002, 12:54 PM
aw, that's really sweet. :) shucks. :)
on La tasse de vie by keatsImnot 11 Sep 2002, 12:56 PM
short/naught?

why the allcaps?
on Seen from a train by aliena 11 Sep 2002, 12:57 PM
a nice ending to the poem. I really didn't like "The Unknown Infinity". s2 and s3 felt to me like they could use some work.
on the rose by keatsImnot 11 Sep 2002, 12:58 PM
I hate roses. (suiters -> suitors).

a decent poem, though.
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 12:59 PM
I read this once a long time ago. I like it, today. I don't think I did then. I must be in an oddly good mood.
on Cow Do by http://David Bowman 11 Sep 2002, 1:00 PM
hilarious but wrong, oh so wrong. :)
on The ONE by Eline 11 Sep 2002, 1:03 PM
"beautiful" doesn't scan right. "And I stopped for none" doesn't scan right, either.

your ending, "because you are the ONE" really hurts the piece, I think.
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 1:04 PM
DA and GW, kissing in a tree, s. i. t. t. i. n. g.!!!
on Cadbury Avenue by Takay Shitar 11 Sep 2002, 12:47 PM
ehh?
on Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11 Sep 2002, 12:42 PM
doesn't quite fit the form, but it's cute.