poemranker ::20 most recent comments by nentwined (561-580) and replies

Comments bynentwined, 561–580 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on 3am by Nicholas Jones 22 Oct 2003, 8:06 AM
plausible. certainly plausible.

pain in the ass, but plausible.

I'll put it on my todo list.
replying on 3am by Nicholas Jones 22 Oct 2003, 7:19 AM
give or take. ;)
replying on 3am by Nicholas Jones 22 Oct 2003, 7:19 AM
I am where the ranker is. so now it's 7:17am.
replying on glimpses by nentwined 22 Oct 2003, 6:56 AM
You really know how to make a person feel good about their poems. Thank you. :)
on 3am by Nicholas Jones 22 Oct 2003, 6:50 AM
I'm particularly fond of that ... particular time.

This is very cute.
replying on glimpses by nentwined 22 Oct 2003, 5:26 AM
thanks; I hadn't considered that at all. :) very interesting. I was certainly going for *something* with "The city/decomposes". Or a couple of things. Hadn't made the leap to post-apocalyptic.
replying on glimpse by nentwined 21 Oct 2003, 3:06 PM
That was an offer; it's as simple as flipping a bit. But as you wish. :)

Geddy Lee?
replying on glimpse by nentwined 20 Oct 2003, 7:55 PM
hrmmmmr?

hmm. would you like something undeleted?
replying on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13 Oct 2003, 1:53 PM
is there something you're not telling us?
on She wishes by INTRANSIT 12 Oct 2003, 8:37 AM
I read this with pain. 8.
on the two faces of the bar social. by darby pyn 12 Oct 2003, 8:16 AM
knives 'drove' -> 'driven'?

relatively interesting piece for an 'angst' poem. couldn't quite get into the flow.
on Song of Spring by meror 11 Oct 2003, 4:39 PM
cute. :)
replying on Birth by nentwined 11 Oct 2003, 4:27 AM
test4
replying on Dammit by Cha no Onna 8 Oct 2003, 8:15 PM
a bit belated (cough cough) but YAY! :)
on power by livingcanvas 8 Oct 2003, 7:49 PM
I like this; simple, but really gets a rhythm.
replying on Why do you give yourself blue tens? by Bachus 2 Oct 2003, 5:34 PM
1 you
2 are
3 a
4 green
5 zer
6 oh

?

oh. is that a letter not a number?
on Why do you give yourself blue tens? by Bachus 2 Oct 2003, 2:26 PM
565

:blink:

566. funny how quickly one can read 'zero' when not paying attention.

la.

I don't like the way you use the title, but... no, I don't like it. That is all.

self-rewarding tens
do not attract green brethren
You are a zero.
replying on whimsicals by nentwined 1 Oct 2003, 7:24 PM
:intently evil grin: thankee. :)
replying on One Moment to the Other (v3) by nentwined 23 Sep 2003, 7:35 AM
so small, so tight, so... :cough:

it's hard to get the flow just right.

I looked and tried

and another fairy died. :/
replying on One Moment to the Other (v3) by nentwined 23 Sep 2003, 7:34 AM
You wouldn't have a pointer to a "near rhyme" online dictionary, would you? ;) My mind isn't working so well. I've lost my moments ;)

So the here is obvious; which there would you drop? I think the second stanza is next weekest, but couldn't think of anything to do with it.