replying on killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined
15 Jan 2003, 5:49 AM
thanks. :) it was... definitely lack-of-sleep inspired.
replying on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined
15 Jan 2003, 5:47 AM
timestamps on all things are local to "over here". so... it's about 5:47am at the moment.
long night. :)
long night. :)
replying on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined
15 Jan 2003, 5:46 AM
actually, if you're getting hex codes and question marks, it's not working. :/
on his hair is an acid trip by blurryphotograph
10 Jan 2003, 6:07 PM
umm. erm. hrm. interesting?
on The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>
4 Jan 2003, 9:41 PM
Thank you very, very much for this. It means a lot. =)
on I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? by bondjedi
29 Dec 2002, 2:23 AM
that's pretty bad.
on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8
28 Dec 2002, 4:56 PM
veddy veddy nice.
on what I saw at work today by Bill Z Bub
28 Dec 2002, 3:22 PM
damn. cheeky but poignant.
I like the title (what I saw at work today), though perhaps something fancier might identify it better.
I like the title (what I saw at work today), though perhaps something fancier might identify it better.
on Maria by Nicholas Monson
28 Dec 2002, 3:15 PM
I understand how hard it can be to work these things... overall I like the piece, but:
"Then I first espied her.
She had beauty to excess!
A laugh to shiver spines -
A Galician princess.
What mystic Yorkshire root
Was stirred in quiemada?
What supernatural spice
Was robbed from heaven's larder?"
really don't work for me. they stumble and may have even broken something.
"Then I first espied her.
She had beauty to excess!
A laugh to shiver spines -
A Galician princess.
What mystic Yorkshire root
Was stirred in quiemada?
What supernatural spice
Was robbed from heaven's larder?"
really don't work for me. they stumble and may have even broken something.
on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar
28 Dec 2002, 3:13 PM
I think connection could be an interesting thing to explore, but... I had no connection with this poem beyond that.
on drum circle by <~>
28 Dec 2002, 2:56 PM
color me confounded and confused. :/
on in a parking lot by <~>
28 Dec 2002, 2:36 PM
interesting, but. Hmm. I don't get the 3x-teed waddler.
on she wonders, by <~>
28 Dec 2002, 1:49 PM
rarr. :)
on To You, In Warmer Climes by <~>
28 Dec 2002, 1:27 PM
I'm afraid this just doesn't move me much. It's very pretty, but it's not for me. 8
on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
17 Dec 2002, 8:41 PM
wow.
you sure managed to get an assload of comments on this. :)
I don't see the balance/lack of competition. I see the straining to destroy. I think I need more to lead me to this zen.
you sure managed to get an assload of comments on this. :)
I don't see the balance/lack of competition. I see the straining to destroy. I think I need more to lead me to this zen.