| Re: Note 2 Myself by Jigg |
29-Jul-02/4:50 PM |
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this ain't no ode, but I still find it hilarious. :)
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| Re: Roundabout by nentwined |
21-Jul-02/2:01 AM |
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the log does. though I don't do anything with it but manually. pain in the fucking ass. :) I try to clear obvious ballot stuffings every so often...
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| Re: non ars poetica by genezapoetica |
20-Jul-02/10:28 PM |
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I like this; not sure why, but I like it. :)
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| Re: Wounded by RobinGayle |
18-Jul-02/9:33 PM |
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| Re: Poem 479 by Nicholas Jones |
18-Jul-02/11:23 AM |
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| Re: Clit by unknown |
17-Jul-02/11:07 AM |
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| Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman |
16-Jul-02/11:38 AM |
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temp'rature; I agree. :) very nice use of the form, though. :)
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| Re: Canned Laughter by Ketiak |
15-Jul-02/4:20 PM |
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| Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin |
15-Jul-02/4:19 PM |
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reminds me of a bumped sticker I read once; doesn't really pull it off for me.
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| Re: IV (Deuteronomy's Lament) by coalcracker |
12-Jul-02/3:45 PM |
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| Re: none by Bakar |
10-Jul-02/7:45 PM |
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silly, but unpleasantly stilted.
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| Re: Black Hearted Graffiti Writer by mogwai |
10-Jul-02/4:12 PM |
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| Re: How Dare You Knock? by unknown |
10-Jul-02/4:12 PM |
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I like the first three lines and the last two. I like the poem as those five lines. dunno. :)
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| Re: Hands by cattatplay |
10-Jul-02/4:11 PM |
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| Re: Ode to Bad poetry by unknown |
10-Jul-02/11:23 AM |
hear hear!
I can't tell if I like the awkwardness of the poem or not, but it's a great statement. Reminds me of something I wrote a few months ago, only this is more comprehensive. :)
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| Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama |
10-Jul-02/8:42 AM |
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what shape are you going for with this?
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| Re: art by feelinglistless |
9-Jul-02/7:40 PM |
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nice -- this seems just an awkward shyness from really amazing. the grocery list works, overall, but needs something more than the title to tie it together... some sort of rhythm, or... dunno. but cool. :)
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| Re: Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer |
9-Jul-02/7:38 PM |
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a nice sentiment, but I couldn't get into it as a poem/song. the rhythm/cadence felt awkward, and it didn't really move me in any manner.
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| Re: guilty mind by Angel_of_fait |
9-Jul-02/7:36 PM |
barrie == bury?
why the use of "u" for "you" half of the time?
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| Re: 1 of 2,543 things she does that starts fires in your grassland heart. by mogwai |
9-Jul-02/7:35 PM |
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significantly amusing, but it looks like prose to me.
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