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20 most recent comments by nentwined (921-940) and replies

Re: Note 2 Myself by Jigg 29-Jul-02/4:50 PM
this ain't no ode, but I still find it hilarious. :)
Re: Roundabout by nentwined 21-Jul-02/2:01 AM
the log does. though I don't do anything with it but manually. pain in the fucking ass. :) I try to clear obvious ballot stuffings every so often...
Re: non ars poetica by genezapoetica 20-Jul-02/10:28 PM
I like this; not sure why, but I like it. :)
Re: Wounded by RobinGayle 18-Jul-02/9:33 PM
simple but perfect.
Re: Poem 479 by Nicholas Jones 18-Jul-02/11:23 AM
eviable?
Re: Clit by unknown 17-Jul-02/11:07 AM
very cute. :)
Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman 16-Jul-02/11:38 AM
temp'rature; I agree. :) very nice use of the form, though. :)
Re: Canned Laughter by Ketiak 15-Jul-02/4:20 PM
interesting. odd.
Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin 15-Jul-02/4:19 PM
reminds me of a bumped sticker I read once; doesn't really pull it off for me.
Re: IV (Deuteronomy's Lament) by coalcracker 12-Jul-02/3:45 PM
uh. huh. k....
Re: none by Bakar 10-Jul-02/7:45 PM
silly, but unpleasantly stilted.
Re: Black Hearted Graffiti Writer by mogwai 10-Jul-02/4:12 PM
very cute. :)
Re: How Dare You Knock? by unknown 10-Jul-02/4:12 PM
I like the first three lines and the last two. I like the poem as those five lines. dunno. :)
Re: Hands by cattatplay 10-Jul-02/4:11 PM
very well done.
Re: Ode to Bad poetry by unknown 10-Jul-02/11:23 AM
hear hear!

I can't tell if I like the awkwardness of the poem or not, but it's a great statement. Reminds me of something I wrote a few months ago, only this is more comprehensive. :)
Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama 10-Jul-02/8:42 AM
what shape are you going for with this?
Re: art by feelinglistless 9-Jul-02/7:40 PM
nice -- this seems just an awkward shyness from really amazing. the grocery list works, overall, but needs something more than the title to tie it together... some sort of rhythm, or... dunno. but cool. :)
Re: Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer 9-Jul-02/7:38 PM
a nice sentiment, but I couldn't get into it as a poem/song. the rhythm/cadence felt awkward, and it didn't really move me in any manner.
Re: guilty mind by Angel_of_fait 9-Jul-02/7:36 PM
barrie == bury?

why the use of "u" for "you" half of the time?
Re: 1 of 2,543 things she does that starts fires in your grassland heart. by mogwai 9-Jul-02/7:35 PM
significantly amusing, but it looks like prose to me.


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