on Roundabout by nentwined
21 Jul 2002, 2:01 AM
the log does. though I don't do anything with it but manually. pain in the fucking ass. :) I try to clear obvious ballot stuffings every so often...
on non ars poetica by genezapoetica
20 Jul 2002, 10:28 PM
I like this; not sure why, but I like it. :)
on Wounded by RobinGayle
18 Jul 2002, 9:33 PM
simple but perfect.
on Poem 479 by Nicholas Jones
18 Jul 2002, 11:23 AM
eviable?
on Clit by unknown
17 Jul 2002, 11:07 AM
very cute. :)
on Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman
16 Jul 2002, 11:38 AM
temp'rature; I agree. :) very nice use of the form, though. :)
on Canned Laughter by Ketiak
15 Jul 2002, 4:20 PM
interesting. odd.
on "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin
15 Jul 2002, 4:19 PM
reminds me of a bumped sticker I read once; doesn't really pull it off for me.
on IV (Deuteronomy's Lament) by coalcracker
12 Jul 2002, 3:45 PM
uh. huh. k....
on Black Hearted Graffiti Writer by mogwai
10 Jul 2002, 4:12 PM
very cute. :)
on How Dare You Knock? by unknown
10 Jul 2002, 4:12 PM
I like the first three lines and the last two. I like the poem as those five lines. dunno. :)
on Hands by cattatplay
10 Jul 2002, 4:11 PM
very well done.
on Ode to Bad poetry by unknown
10 Jul 2002, 11:23 AM
hear hear!
I can't tell if I like the awkwardness of the poem or not, but it's a great statement. Reminds me of something I wrote a few months ago, only this is more comprehensive. :)
I can't tell if I like the awkwardness of the poem or not, but it's a great statement. Reminds me of something I wrote a few months ago, only this is more comprehensive. :)
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
10 Jul 2002, 8:42 AM
what shape are you going for with this?
on art by feelinglistless
9 Jul 2002, 7:40 PM
nice -- this seems just an awkward shyness from really amazing. the grocery list works, overall, but needs something more than the title to tie it together... some sort of rhythm, or... dunno. but cool. :)
on Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2002, 7:38 PM
a nice sentiment, but I couldn't get into it as a poem/song. the rhythm/cadence felt awkward, and it didn't really move me in any manner.
on guilty mind by Angel_of_fait
9 Jul 2002, 7:36 PM
barrie == bury?
why the use of "u" for "you" half of the time?
why the use of "u" for "you" half of the time?
on 1 of 2,543 things she does that starts fires in your grassland heart. by mogwai
9 Jul 2002, 7:35 PM
significantly amusing, but it looks like prose to me.
on A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin
9 Jul 2002, 7:34 PM
a nice sentiment, but I couldn't get into the cadence of the poem and didn't really find anything to take out of it/remember from it.