on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2003, 1:26 PM
they didn't give you 20 sets?l
on Seasoning a new tank by Cha no Onna
14 Jan 2003, 12:29 PM
Tell that to the atlantians. Your tank has to much ammonia and nitrite in it. Change your water, and improve your filters. Buy a cichclid to dispose of the gold fish
on Another Day by Brighteyes
13 Jan 2003, 2:45 AM
why bother? we could use the extra oxygen at the rate we're hacking down trees.
on oh it hurt so much by w~* ATHENA *~w
12 Jan 2003, 12:42 PM
dotard.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
13 Jan 2003, 2:39 AM
666 the mark of the yeast.
on You're the Only One by Chels85
12 Jan 2003, 1:25 PM
for fucks sake. i just heard the "it's a small world afterall" theme song to this, but god knows if i vote with bias they'll mock me. call me racist, and if i vote with awe and glossy eyes they'll say i'm a dolt. if you let your parents stand in the way of a nice rock hard black cock.than it wasn't love and you're a fool...do you know who "they" are? my shoe laces and zippers. 5..
on Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal
12 Jan 2003, 1:27 PM
add two lines and this would be a sonnet, maybe it already is??
on God and Country by dougsoderstrom
12 Jan 2003, 1:29 PM
radical. "SWAGGER AWARD FOR MISSILES AND JESUS IN A SUPER COMPACT HAIKU WITH EVEN A PEW TOO" nice one.
on betsy's hands by onepinksock
12 Jan 2003, 1:30 PM
i have a rule against the word angel in poetry, but this is a masterful piece..have a 10.
on Thank You Mom by savannah
12 Jan 2003, 1:33 PM
yeah, thanks mom.you fucking ancient gorge in the side of my mind. can i get a little vagina juice to go with my gaea enima. yeah thanks mom. for your history too, and that lucky scarf. bitch. take all my tens like you burned my captain caveman doll..rotten snatch.w
on some deleted poem
12 Jan 2003, 1:04 PM
so, you did fuckface below with no qualms, but -dashed- the fuckings in the poem?Also: do you think you're clever and subtextual? let me kbow..these things facinate me. that and goat cheese.
on Untitled by purplestain
12 Jan 2003, 1:08 PM
i've found you four titles.
!)machine-readable
2)syncopation
3)Has anyone seen my pants.
4)i bought a cat named rat
what do you think?$
!)machine-readable
2)syncopation
3)Has anyone seen my pants.
4)i bought a cat named rat
what do you think?$
on Rose Wall by Carvaceous
12 Jan 2003, 1:20 PM
worthwhile.
on his hair is an acid trip by blurryphotograph
10 Jan 2003, 6:31 PM
it's david lee roth no!!!!!!!!
on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2003, 1:25 PM
make this a villanella macabella with the "25 minutes with u"..that would be powerful shite.e
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 2:47 AM
strong finish
on Nature's Artistry by Quarton
13 Jan 2003, 2:50 AM
so what you're saying is...don't talk to strangers..unless they have candy?