on Memory by Miggy
22 Dec 2003, 10:14 PM
What kind of music is this for?
on Things Are Going to be Different Next Year by JanieDoe
22 Dec 2003, 10:22 PM
Huh...I like the ending. I think "smirk" is weak, you shouldn't try so hard to rhyme. Your message is interesting enough.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2003, 10:23 PM
Do not ever use "proverbial" in a poem...its just a bad idea...
on Intense Irrational Realities by Venus
22 Dec 2003, 10:23 PM
Like it!
on secert love by crwncka1
24 Dec 2003, 9:19 AM
You spelled "Secret" wrong.
on some deleted poem
25 Dec 2003, 10:43 AM
I'm sorry, what did men sucking their own dicks have to do with the rest of the poem? Were you, you know, doing that....?
on I cant stand you by sk8rs_rule_all
28 Dec 2003, 3:07 PM
Awesome!! (Don't you think its a bit cruel, though? Don't tell me that YOU'VE never been rejected before by somebody you were crushing on...). Nonetheless, if you recategorized this as a pimple poem, its good shit.
on Lemon Dream vs. Reality by TanHand
1 Jan 2004, 1:37 PM
You should check into a nursing home. I'm sure you'd rapidly acquire an audience there.
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2004, 8:00 PM
Hi, I am not sure this makes a very good poem, but let me say, I TOTALLY AGREE AND BELIEVE everything you said! :)
on Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco
14 Feb 2005, 9:02 PM
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2005, 5:04 AM
They probably AREN'T trying to be viewed as respectable.
on A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 9:31 AM
I really enjoyed this poem!!
on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 9:32 AM
Agreed!
on The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 9:34 AM
their should be spelled "there", just to let you know.
Also, "loose" should be "lose"
Also, "loose" should be "lose"
on famous by crooked_smile
6 Apr 2005, 10:41 PM
Jack Handy, look out....
on Sugar by celticskatermatt1
17 May 2005, 6:38 PM
LOL this made my day.
on am i right? by celticskatermatt1
17 May 2005, 6:39 PM
You are my favorite Poemranker poet, at this time. Why? Because you are just HONEST...
on Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1
17 May 2005, 6:44 PM
All the lions are clawing at your guts right now, because they can't stand the fact that your work is more sincere than theirs. Thanks for remaining Un-pretentious. Hopefully they will start to pay more attention to the cocks up THEIR asses!!!
on Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus
17 May 2005, 6:45 PM
DAMN!