on Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus
17 May 2005, 6:45 PM
DAMN!
on Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1
17 May 2005, 6:44 PM
All the lions are clawing at your guts right now, because they can't stand the fact that your work is more sincere than theirs. Thanks for remaining Un-pretentious. Hopefully they will start to pay more attention to the cocks up THEIR asses!!!
on am i right? by celticskatermatt1
17 May 2005, 6:39 PM
You are my favorite Poemranker poet, at this time. Why? Because you are just HONEST...
on Sugar by celticskatermatt1
17 May 2005, 6:38 PM
LOL this made my day.
on famous by crooked_smile
6 Apr 2005, 10:41 PM
Jack Handy, look out....
on The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 9:34 AM
their should be spelled "there", just to let you know.
Also, "loose" should be "lose"
Also, "loose" should be "lose"
on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 9:32 AM
Agreed!
on A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 9:31 AM
I really enjoyed this poem!!
replying on Background Noise by Plaidypus
28 Feb 2005, 7:31 AM
At first I was hurt by this comment...then I read YOUR poetry, and realized you hadn't gone through puberty yet...
on Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco
14 Feb 2005, 9:02 PM
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
replying on Love Poem in HTML by Plaidypus
14 Feb 2005, 8:59 PM
How is one supposed to make any real progress if they never put themselves out there and try to experiment, once in a while? This is not necessarily a finished piece....furthermore, if you actually knew anything about HTML then you would find it amusing. I actually wrote this for a friend of mine who is an English major, and knows how to write code, and he loved it. The code puts is intended to put it into a sort of geeky, cyberspace context. I'm not saying its a work of genius, but I am DEFINITELY trying to do something original. I will NOT just "write the poem," thank you very much. All poetry sounds too similar...and I am trying something new.
on Lemon Dream vs. Reality by TanHand
1 Jan 2004, 1:37 PM
You should check into a nursing home. I'm sure you'd rapidly acquire an audience there.
on I cant stand you by sk8rs_rule_all
28 Dec 2003, 3:07 PM
Awesome!! (Don't you think its a bit cruel, though? Don't tell me that YOU'VE never been rejected before by somebody you were crushing on...). Nonetheless, if you recategorized this as a pimple poem, its good shit.
on secert love by crwncka1
24 Dec 2003, 9:19 AM
You spelled "Secret" wrong.
on Intense Irrational Realities by Venus
22 Dec 2003, 10:23 PM
Like it!
on Things Are Going to be Different Next Year by JanieDoe
22 Dec 2003, 10:22 PM
Huh...I like the ending. I think "smirk" is weak, you shouldn't try so hard to rhyme. Your message is interesting enough.