on The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick
29 Jul 2005, 4:43 AM
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2005, 4:48 AM
The Arabic word for "wig" comes from the root "blessed". Interesting, huh?
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2005, 2:09 AM
Oh, are they shaming you guys at some obscure white-pantsed sport again?
on My Mornings were Filled with Nightmares and Pies by T. Jonathron Remp
29 Jul 2005, 4:18 AM
"Sweet smelling clouds Darken my skies" is the best description of the men's tent at an Arab wedding I've ever read.
on Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17
29 Jul 2005, 4:22 AM
Hey, you're right. It IS so much better than reality.
on Polar Bearings by impert&ent
29 Jul 2005, 4:30 AM
Seriously, that's kind of clever. Because the only way you couldn't draw a line around the earth to pass between two objects is if one was on top of the other.
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2005, 5:27 AM
Brilliant. Beautiful.
on A Night at the Move-ies by Crann Mascher
6 Aug 2005, 3:03 AM
Makes me wonder, why did you emphasize "move" in movies? Movies just means pictures that move.
on Never born. by | Broken |
6 Aug 2005, 3:10 AM
Maybe you don't want to, but if you DID want to make this poem EVEN BETTER you might make the following edits:
Breathe => breath,
Planning about your perfect life => Planning your perfect life,
dreamt => dreamed,
it to => it would,
.. => [nothing],
long => longer,
.. => [nothing],
punctuation throughout.
Just a suggestion. I really enjoyed seeing what it would be like to live pointlessly. -10-
Breathe => breath,
Planning about your perfect life => Planning your perfect life,
dreamt => dreamed,
it to => it would,
.. => [nothing],
long => longer,
.. => [nothing],
punctuation throughout.
Just a suggestion. I really enjoyed seeing what it would be like to live pointlessly. -10-
on Writer's Block by shadows
6 Aug 2005, 3:32 AM
Awkward. Ironic, huh? Congratulations on being the second poem titled "Writer's Block" on poemranker this week.
on Observation of a stupéfait by Dental Panic
1 Aug 2005, 10:37 PM
Cool. leaves', not leaves.
on some deleted poem
1 Aug 2005, 11:24 PM
"the burdens you've borne"
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2005, 5:35 AM
I just heard careless whisper twice in a row on Jordanian radio and thought, I went to grad school for this.
on SO LONG MY BELOVED by prettyktm
3 Aug 2005, 5:38 AM
Hi, if you want to talk the language of love and peace, I'd say stop talking about "this isn't my war but I've gotta go cause a man's gotta do his duty and kill people who are just doing their duties and so on and so on". That's what lets wars happen. Personally, I'd pack up for Canada, see what they do when they don't have any more suckers to shoot out of their cannons.
on That Summer by XOXScottishgrlXOX
9 Aug 2005, 2:10 AM
I predict your life is going to be spectacularly eventful and dramatic, and not in a good way.
on More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX
9 Aug 2005, 2:14 AM
Everyone has whose problems? Don't you mean 'Everyone has his (or her) problems'? Or even better, 'Everyone has problems'?
Sorry for being nitpicky. Notice even Dovina didn't catch it. As for the poem, I wish there was something new you could say about God. You'd think, hey He's infinte, there must be an infinite number of original things to say about Him. Funny how there isn't, huh?
Sorry for being nitpicky. Notice even Dovina didn't catch it. As for the poem, I wish there was something new you could say about God. You'd think, hey He's infinte, there must be an infinite number of original things to say about Him. Funny how there isn't, huh?
on Waiting Room by jessicazee
9 Aug 2005, 2:16 AM
You're currently the best writer on the site. For what it's worth. An honest-to-goodness 10.
on BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm
9 Aug 2005, 1:43 AM
The actual English expression is "With all your heart". I'm not trying to be hypercritical, that just seemed important, seeing as it's your title and all.
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