on My Sun by T. Becquerel
6 Sep 2002, 6:26 AM
Uandulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
on My Sun by T. Becquerel
6 Sep 2002, 6:28 AM
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
on The green mile by Ming T. Merciless
4 Sep 2002, 3:14 AM
Oh dear. Having been impressed by some of your earlier work, I feel only disappointment having read this dire effort. 1/10. Come on Ming, surely you can do better than this!
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
8 Oct 2002, 5:01 AM
Brilliant. 9. A highly enjoyable read. To the outraged commenteers: if you don't like his poems, don't read his poems. Simple.
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 5:43 AM
Why do people try and comment on "appropriate Stanza" etc etc?
Surely "total shite" is enough?!?!
Surely "total shite" is enough?!?!
on Daniela by little_angel_maria
14 Oct 2002, 4:50 AM
Hmmm. Hints at a dark experience, although sadly for you it is not conveyed well at all. I conclude that this is one of two things: a)the nonsensical ramblings of a moron or b) simply a bad, bad poem. 2/10.
on America by little_angel_maria
14 Oct 2002, 4:54 AM
Sorry, but I just think this is childish pap. Poor structure, very wishy-washy, and very cliched. 1/10
on Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog
9 Sep 2002, 4:50 AM
A very good effort, T De La B. 8/10. The only reasons this has not been scored more highly are that I feel you have taken a little too much "creative inspiration" from Roald Dahl and also your consistent pottymouth.
on My Sun by T. Becquerel
6 Sep 2002, 6:30 AM
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
on My Sun by T. Becquerel
6 Sep 2002, 6:30 AM
Unadulterated cat litter, this, I'm afraid. I hope I never see another of your poems again. 2/10.
on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2002, 6:33 AM
I hope you didn't spend too long writing this, as it is pure toss. Random words thrown together do not make poetry. 3/10. I've seen worse, but not much.
on purple by youngweirdo
6 Sep 2002, 6:25 AM
I like your thinking - you may be young, you may also be wierd, but I'll follow your work. 8. Also nothing rhymes with "orange", which pisses me off.
on Multicultural motel by Ming T. Merciless
23 Aug 2002, 6:46 AM
A rather interesting sideways view of multicultural society and how several peoples can be integrated whilst still alienating others - a very moving piece. 8/10. I will follow your work, He Who Has No Mercy.
on Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog
20 Aug 2002, 4:35 AM
A rather delectable haiku on what I presume to be a fairly tacky drug experience. I particularly like your use of repetition to hammer home your point with authority. 9/10.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 4:06 PM
A reasonable effort. What we truly need in today's ailing society is more poems about the unkempt monkey - le twat d'ruffle if you will. 9/10. Keep it up.
on ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo
17 Aug 2002, 3:54 PM
Young? Perhaps. Talented? I think not. A wierdo? Most assuredly. My good chap, you should be ashamed of yourself. This is G.C.S.E. poetry at it's worst. For your crimes against the English language you should be hung, drawn and quartered - and then presented to Satan on a pewter platter to do as He will. Shocking. 1/10.
on eat a grape please by skaskowski
17 Aug 2002, 3:58 PM
I think the most constructive comment I am able to muster is simply thus: Occasionally you should consider leaving your room. Shambolic. 2/10, and that is considering that I am feeling particularly generous on this night.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2002, 9:46 AM
Shocking. Many poets on this site post twaddle which hint at talent, thought, inspiration etc. You, however, are merely shit. 0. Get off the internet, you're late for nursery.