on Beer by Yardbird
29 Oct 2002, 8:43 AM
A tepid effort. 2.
on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin
8 Nov 2002, 7:59 AM
An unfortunate error of judgement, but a decent haiku. 7.
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2002, 8:32 AM
I agree with Tintagiles (for once).
0 for the haiku, 8 for the sentiments expressed. But still a 0.
0 for the haiku, 8 for the sentiments expressed. But still a 0.
on Die by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 8:27 AM
The poem gets an 8. Sadly, you get a 0, as I have read a poem bizarrely similar to this before. Sorry, but no points for plagiarism!!!!
on I remenber by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 5:16 AM
Rubbish. 0. If your Dad "holves" you, it sounds as though he should be reported to the relevant authorities. Jesus, your poems' ratings are beginning to resemble binary code.
on Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus
30 Oct 2002, 3:22 AM
A good effort. 7. Can't fault any kind of tribute to the late great Jeff Buckley. Bravo!
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
30 Oct 2002, 3:33 AM
A truthful account of many, many mornings. 7. I shall assume that most of the "low voters" are female.
on The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit
29 Oct 2002, 8:44 AM
Sorry, I'm a purist. Not a bad poem in itself, but an abhorrent haiku. Have a 0 and learn to OBEY THE RULES!!!!!!!
on Missing You by psychedelic
28 Oct 2002, 4:21 AM
I don't think the last line works, unfortunately. Would have been a good haiku otherwise. Ho hum, such is life..... 4.
on wax by New Life Drug
28 Oct 2002, 4:20 AM
Strange - this doesn't make any kind of sense whatsoever. Would indeed be better for the loss of the last line. 3.
on some deleted poem
28 Oct 2002, 4:28 AM
This is everything a haiku should avoid - dull, uninspiring, provoking no thought whatsoever - and on a dead horse of a subject which people obviously never tire of flogging. Have a 0 for this weak effort.
on some deleted poem
28 Oct 2002, 4:35 AM
A woman scorned and all that....
I remember the Game of Life board game from my younger days - it was dull, uninspiring and tired - just like this poem. 2.
I remember the Game of Life board game from my younger days - it was dull, uninspiring and tired - just like this poem. 2.
on Coloured waifs home by horus8
24 Oct 2002, 4:32 AM
Not what I expected from the (misspelt) title, but a well pieced haiku nevertheless. Take this 7, and use it well.
And yes, I am a pedant.
And yes, I am a pedant.
on some deleted poem
24 Oct 2002, 4:39 AM
I bet you thought this was a good haiku when you penned it. Sadly, you were wrong as wrong can be. A pointless piece. 1. Pap.
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 8:41 AM
Had you posted the last one alone, a 7 beckoned. as it is, 3. Immature poetry has it's place - but it should at least amuse.
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 8:47 AM
Good ending. 7. I needed a chuckle.
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 4:20 AM
Impressive. I approve of the element of self-doubt in the final line. 7. One question - are the Waffle's powers quelled by consuming the Findus Crispy Pancake of Doom? I must know!
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 5:39 AM
One of your better efforts. 3.