on The correct order of things by Stephen Robins
29 Oct 2004, 8:22 PM
a nude, three-legged sack race in a mosquito swarm.
on The Star Of The Bum by Blindpoetry
29 Oct 2004, 8:18 PM
is this written in braille or some other code?
on Call upon the wrath of god on ye by Imago
29 Oct 2004, 8:15 PM
rigiditus nippulatum, et clampostona ingratiae solorum solarum, slapadiddle dildatum
replying on Dear George Bush by scitz
29 Oct 2004, 8:07 PM
you never saw this kinda thing happen when the dimocrats were ruining the cuntry.
I think saddam chicken salad is running the cuntry and the cities too, and that he only allows the appearance of democracy so that lazy bastards like myself don't get too riled. a smoothe transition y'know?
of course, fuck old George, but the "poem" is awful, and hackneyed. everyone says that shit, day in and day out, fuck of mr pres...bla bla bla.
I think saddam chicken salad is running the cuntry and the cities too, and that he only allows the appearance of democracy so that lazy bastards like myself don't get too riled. a smoothe transition y'know?
of course, fuck old George, but the "poem" is awful, and hackneyed. everyone says that shit, day in and day out, fuck of mr pres...bla bla bla.
on The Old Man by spriggan
29 Oct 2004, 8:02 PM
a gaping hole. This is great.
on The Old Man by spriggan
29 Oct 2004, 8:01 PM
fucking hilarious. Why is he taking pain killers that poison his body? There are perfectly good painkillers on the market that do not poison the body.
nothing worse than a poor afficted soul, eh? the end line makes it all worth while, and completely stands this motherfucker on its head and redeems it with a broom handle.
nothing worse than a poor afficted soul, eh? the end line makes it all worth while, and completely stands this motherfucker on its head and redeems it with a broom handle.
on From Womb To Wood by Caducus
29 Oct 2004, 7:49 PM
I don't think the end redeems anything. He should never have died? hmmmm
I thought it was well conceived and well written until the last few lines... though the entire last stanza is awkward.
I thought it was well conceived and well written until the last few lines... though the entire last stanza is awkward.
on Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus
29 Oct 2004, 5:43 PM
asshole. nigger. stupid sonovabitch. Idiot. imbecile. mammoth.
on I Don't Care by ForgottenSoul17
29 Oct 2004, 4:27 PM
a floppy, shaven walrus clit
on I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62
29 Oct 2004, 4:25 PM
you have an ugly face
on Delicate Was by klosterfobik
28 Oct 2004, 7:01 AM
i had intended to rank this poem on its merits, but then I read the comments. adverb indeed. -0-
on repeated sins, repeated prayer by oneglove
27 Oct 2004, 5:25 AM
you are so weak.
you are so inadequate.
you are so inadequate.
on Grandma in love by Caducus
26 Oct 2004, 11:38 AM
i would suggest "new" in place of "anew"
also, "fall" in place of "falter"
a 10 anyway
also, "fall" in place of "falter"
a 10 anyway
on Grandma in love by Caducus
26 Oct 2004, 11:36 AM
a wicked and inspired jug solo
on Harvey the Dolphin Sucker by T. Jonathron Remp
26 Oct 2004, 10:54 AM
comment by Richard E. Watley
just beautiful
just beautiful
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
26 Oct 2004, 5:07 AM
shame you could not work "tars" into this somehow.
"Oh, I know you didn't just..."
I close one eye and hunker
expecting a sudden and bleeding passenger.
I click on the four-ways and ease
to the shoulder.
The sentence structure becomes repetitive, with all the "I-verb-object"