Re: THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:39 PM
Not a sonnet No vote
Re: Cliche by Blue Magpie	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:40 PM
largess should be largesse Very good -9-
Re: Billy Bob Jo by Inconceivable_Dreams	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:42 PM
doesen't grab me
Re: Migrating Storks by Blue Magpie	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:43 PM
Ten! Nuff said
Re: The folded ways your eyes cave by Shardik	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:46 PM
Jesus
Re: IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:47 PM
Not a Villanelle So no vote
Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:47 PM
What the fuck
Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:48 PM
Not bad
Re: The Errant Knight by Thyme	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:49 PM
Okay, I'm sorry but if you are younger than 300 years old this is slightly rediculous. However, points for the form
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:52 PM
Can we say Prosaic?
Re: Totally Hair by TanHand	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:55 PM
Rediculous and forced rhymes
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:57 PM
a satchel of shit
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 69.138.236.63	9-May-04/8:57 PM
Jesus
Re: Mom by nothingtoanyone	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	10-May-04/1:16 AM
An endearingly heartfelt guff.
Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	10-May-04/1:20 AM
BLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRHGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH! -10_
Re: In the berth by INTRANSIT	cleverdevice 212.219.142.161	10-May-04/3:05 AM
Beautiful.
Re: Spring Cleaning by horus8	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	10-May-04/3:48 AM
Lemme guess - red? Excellent.
Re: Anodyne by wilco	zodiac 67.240.155.203	10-May-04/3:48 AM
"like a drifter bedding down for the night." He IS a drifter bedding down for the night. Nice fail!
Re: Lover by daveslady	zodiac 67.240.155.203	10-May-04/3:58 AM
If you were forced - let's say at gunpoint, or else by some crazed chef wielding a large rancid hamhock - anyway, I'm getting off topic: What I mean is, if you were forced by a hamhock-wielding maniac to identify yourself some other way than by your connection to Dave, could you? You should probably think about this question a lot more than you're going to.
Re: Serendipity by cuddlytiger17	zodiac 67.240.155.203	10-May-04/4:07 AM
I disagree with hypatia. I find the rhymes here sublime, though pity/serendipity did feel rather like throwing myself at a full run into the back of a parked Dodge Dart.