Re: Municipal park by richa	aliena 210.214.123.74	1-Apr-04/11:56 PM
what is the fibal verdict? has or have?
Re: Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	2-Apr-04/12:02 AM
Nice poem dicksplat.
Re: lullaby by the indign	aliena 210.214.123.74	1-Apr-04/11:51 PM
"as the dawn begins to fade brightening up the dusk" How??
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	aliena 210.214.123.74	2-Apr-04/12:08 AM
Excellent, excellent!!! take a 10 for this poem about my favourite impressionist
Re: How does it feel? by OfaRevolutionAJD	Doc 207.5.245.246	2-Apr-04/4:10 AM
Reads fine.
Re: ode to summer dreams by jsd	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	2-Apr-04/4:50 AM
This poem could amaze, In many different ways, However if it stays, I will forfeit my lunch out of my bum before reaching a loo.
Re: lullaby by the indign	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	2-Apr-04/4:53 AM
Give me a poem less rubbish, And i will it furnish, A mark of more than two, For at the moment it has made me revrse-void my lunch all over my seat.
Re: Shelley by King Abdullah II	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	2-Apr-04/5:04 AM
This poem is gayness personified.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	2-Apr-04/6:16 AM
tomcheese, It appears that you are forever duty bound to remain peripheral. Oh yeah, I forgot, you're Canadian.
Re: Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	2-Apr-04/6:27 AM
If I knew the origins of any of these movie references, (I guess that's what they are.) I might enjoy the poem more. Still it's good
Re: matador by ThePariahDog	ThePariahDog 128.186.126.65	2-Apr-04/6:37 AM
the imagery includes a definitive female presence. a bull's horns resemble the placement of ovaries and its snout can be compared to something else that's wet and slimy. i don't believe that artists should have to explain their works, so i'll say no more.
Re: ode to summer dreams by jsd	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	2-Apr-04/6:37 AM
Most of the rhymes are forced. You'd do better without them, I think. Still, some good lines, "keep your reasons close to your soul."
Re: The Day The World Blew Away by OfaRevolutionAJD	some deleted user 68.169.177.107	2-Apr-04/6:38 AM
Too many redundant lines. A good thought with a touch of ambiguity.
Re: How does it feel? by OfaRevolutionAJD	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	2-Apr-04/8:43 AM
DO PRINT "GUFF" LOOP
Re: First move by aliena	tre 147.9.40.233	2-Apr-04/8:59 AM
know what you mean
Re: I hope not by colndodg	tre 147.9.40.233	2-Apr-04/9:03 AM
love it, im an atheist!
Re: I wish... by Jai	tre 147.9.40.233	2-Apr-04/9:04 AM
i get it completely, simple though
Re: Search Engine by OneFingerAnswer	tre 147.9.40.233	2-Apr-04/9:06 AM
i like it
Re: Cargo pants by tre	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	2-Apr-04/9:27 AM
Hi tre ^_^ I thought this was such a cool poeme! i hope you'll read some of mine n tell me what u think!!1
Re: love comes but once by francis nor capule	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.213.67.10	2-Apr-04/10:02 AM
That is the sappiest thing I've ever read. To say the least its wretched. To say the most its honest but lacking in both the wonder that is love and the writing that is poetry. I hope this impressed your "lover" because thats the only person you should have shared this set of words with. This type of peom is whats known as a Pimple. I should know I've written alot of them before they even had it as a poem type. Read more verse. Good Verse. Then try writing. Exsamples here being -=Dark_Angel=- to show you shear verbal skill and intelligence, Godswife and Horus8(In his many different usernames) for depth, humor, and emotion. -2- Just because its honest, horrid, but honest.