Re: Justifications by Evening	little_big_nose 216.207.133.122	2-Jan-04/5:33 PM
This is GREAT! I can totally relate to it, keep up yhe good work
Re: somewhere between alpha and omega by crin	little_big_nose 216.207.133.122	2-Jan-04/5:34 PM
It's pretty good, I don't understand it, which is proubly what you're going for, so good job
Re: Dispersion by timfowler	little_big_nose 216.207.133.122	2-Jan-04/5:36 PM
I don't really like this one, I dunno why, and I wish I did so maybe it's help you, but I'm not that great, so don't listen to what I think
Re: Wondering by anagram	little_big_nose 216.207.133.122	2-Jan-04/5:38 PM
This is pretty good, and I enjoied reading it. I hope you find the answers you are looking for
Re: Worshipping the Porclin God by Derge	little_big_nose 216.207.133.122	2-Jan-04/5:40 PM
This was fun to read and I really liked it
Re: Dizzy by phbiscuit	lastobelus 217.226.20.245	2-Jan-04/5:40 PM
I liked this one too. It's also whimsical, like deadweight, but less gothic. I really am a sucker for whimsy. check out my pome Taller Girl, it has a spinning girl in it too. Assuming your spinner is a girl. Woman. Female. Person. You know.
Re: Whose God? by elizabethann	little_big_nose 216.207.133.122	2-Jan-04/5:42 PM
NICE! I think god sucks ass, so I see me and you are on the same page, please read my poem "where was god" and give me your thoughts
Re: Whose God? by elizabethann	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	2-Jan-04/5:51 PM
I give it a 7... i think it is an ok poem. But the only thing that turns me down is the whole God thing... but thats only me. Still, pretty well written...
Re: Where was god? by little_big_nose	lastobelus 217.226.20.245	2-Jan-04/6:24 PM
He was HANGING ON THE CROSS bleeding his guts out so that...so that, um, SO HIS FATHER COULD LET YOU INTO HEAVEN instead of having to send you to ETERNAL DAMNATION, you ungrateful clod. Don't be deceived by letting SATAN MAKE YOU THINK THERE's SO MUCH EMPHASIS on this physical plane. God is concerned with our SOULS not with our PHYSICAL BODIES. Sometimes what he IS FORCED TO DO TO COMBAT SATAN and save our ETERNAL SOULS is hard for us to understand with our emphasis on EARTHLY CONCERNS. Since your cousin OD'd she's DEFINITELY GOING TO HELL, but maybe if she'd lived 10 years longer she would have had two little babies and DECEIVED THEM INTO HELL TOO!!!!! So God had to take her now to SAVE THE BABIES FROM HELL!!!! Who are YOU to QUESTION GOD?
Re: A stitch by EAger to Offend	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	2-Jan-04/6:28 PM
some conjuringing? a curse? Have a snowman; eat his nose.
Re: O Death by lastobelus	little_big_nose 216.207.134.233	2-Jan-04/6:45 PM
remember me, im the dude who wrote 'where was god', well it's my quite firm belife that There is no god to question, he doesn't exist...i bet you would love to know that i work at a Planned Parenthood office, If you liked that one, read this New commandments Your extinct god Will bow down before me and call himself a fraud And tell your poor abused children that I will end the animosity I will be the one to set them free The new ten commandments go as follows He who prays, also wallows Tho shalt not commit a crime To buy your extinct god time Tho shall destroy all idols Tho shall burn every bible Tho shall dine in thy own mercy As soon as they can kill me Tho shall sin in my name And tho shall treat life as a game Tho shalt not rape thy mother Tho shalt not love thy brother For the final preparation To assure the restoration Tho shall sing for satan To give back all you have taken
Re: Sonnet IX by tuthaliash	tadpole 24.55.117.36	2-Jan-04/9:27 PM
whoa I really like this one, good work!
regarding some deleted poem...	Katzclear 12.222.55.183	2-Jan-04/9:34 PM
*mwah* christmas poetry at its best :D
regarding some deleted poem...	tadpole 24.55.117.36	2-Jan-04/9:44 PM
:)
Re: I like to annoy people with my new digital camera by DavetheRave	tadpole 24.55.117.36	2-Jan-04/9:46 PM
You must be crazy!
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 65.234.197.131	2-Jan-04/9:53 PM
*groans* The whole world doesn't treat the holiday with disgrace because the whole world does not celebrate Christmas. I think this comes across as a little too preachy. Your message of people needing to acknowledge the holiday's true meaning is important enough to write about. Still, I think it could be done in a better way.
regarding some deleted poem...	dragonfly 65.234.197.131	2-Jan-04/9:59 PM
This reads like a bad hallmark card.
Re: I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake	titan69 213.48.74.56	3-Jan-04/12:56 AM
If you can be so hooked on coffee. Never try DRUGS? I like this poem. Wright poems just how you feel dont take note of these first grade English dicks who tell you every things wrong.......
Re: Too obvious by INTRANSIT	BiggRobb 172.173.124.84	3-Jan-04/12:59 AM
Finally, someone who feels my pain
Re: Rape by titan69	titan69 213.48.74.56	3-Jan-04/1:03 AM
what sort of shity commenting is this????????