Good stuff, but I think you can snip away to get it flowing better. I'd cut "This" from the title. Cut "thin" from the "wink of moon" - good line by the way. Little things like that.

Cutting edge!!!!!!!! Super!!!!!!

So what.

The Death of My Bend (Free churo) by rockymagnesium The ache is continuously solemn. Throbbing in dissatisfaction and glee, Wisdom tooth rises like a golem, Companion from youth, socks soaked in pee I will miss you naked on bamboo When you’re gonesky.

unfallable.

excellent visuals, a soft sensual flow throughout..

Cute little snippet, relieved it was about death in a very light hearted way.

Mine is the Earl of March. http://www.goodwood-racing.com/images/paddock/V9cb4.jpg

There is just no understanding (to me) the why of the popular idols. Seen Elvis lately. Perhaps it is because there are no moral issues or admonishment involved. Good question, Well asked!

I doesn't know why they - I've thought about it too. I've ne'r heard of Andrea Corr, btw - but I've just looked her up, thanks. My idols (though thats a pretty strong word) come and go and and vary by subject. In music, I'd have to say Don Henley; poetry - Wallace Stevens. For racing, I'd have to agree with Mr. D. Angel ...

The tooth may be gone. The ache of wisdom never parts.

I like Kurt Russel and Viggo Mortenson.

Richard Lewis couldn't have said it better. In fact? He didn't.

Quasi bombastic leave blower. And extra onions.

Sounds like a Narcissuses' pre supper hymn to be sure.

enjoyable read, blessed with 9.

All that is missing is majestic music!

Considering it is painfully obvious from your imagery that you have never hunted before and are relying of clichéd observations from your past and maybe the dictionary, the fact that you use it as the base metaphor for what you are trying to say is, how I should put this, ridiculous. Thanks for you time. Rally other than that it is quite lovely. And such original thinking.

Daring!!!!! Original!~!!! Super!!!!