Re: Jess and Andrea during english class by jesslew	Dovina 75.82.86.162	14-Mar-07/1:03 PM
Jess is a woman (can have children) apparently by Andrea, a man. Then Andrea will soon be a mom. Nice. At least the lines are 5-7-5.
Re: I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake	cheese.doodles 70.52.171.118	14-Mar-07/3:01 PM
grating due to repetition and grammatically incorrect.
Re: Inspire Me by Blindpoetry	cheese.doodles 70.52.171.118	14-Mar-07/3:02 PM
Good Lord, this is angsty. Sounds like lyrics for an emo band.
Re: A Fake Hollywood by Blindpoetry	cheese.doodles 70.52.171.118	14-Mar-07/3:05 PM
Your irritating rhyme scheme makes this nearly unreadable.
Re: The Greek Philosopher Poem; cutting wrists in the bathtub by cheese.doodles	<{Baba^Yaga}> 66.47.195.202	14-Mar-07/3:52 PM
your title is ass, but the poem was nice.
Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	Shuushin 65.175.177.241	14-Mar-07/6:46 PM
the only one I've actually read past the first line
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 65.175.177.241	14-Mar-07/6:46 PM
still a zero
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 65.175.177.241	14-Mar-07/6:50 PM
blurry
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 76.170.36.27	14-Mar-07/8:24 PM
Wow, you almost sound american. I mean, if an english puff was american. Summing up all Americans in general certainly doesn't provide you with a comedy gun, this poem was Fdung. Yes, that's right, I said "Fdung".
Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	Shardik 76.170.36.27	14-Mar-07/8:24 PM
lol
Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!	Shardik 76.170.36.27	14-Mar-07/8:28 PM
"Jew green hill" That was my favorite line. Hungary certainly is teeing up to be a lovely... Situation. I suppose even the Jews occasionally have a hard time hiding their obvious hatred of everyone but themselves.
Re: Pedaling West by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Mar-07/1:50 AM
There once was a blob named Dovina, Christ, you'd have wept had you seen her, All of that weight, Squeeze into four feet and eight, She had the combined mass of Bosnia and Herzegovina.
Re: Jess and Andrea during english class by jesslew	Ranger 81.103.124.179	15-Mar-07/3:06 AM
Change the first line of stanza 12 to "Ne'er leave me, Jesu"
Re: Waffleman by Stephen Robins	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Mar-07/3:43 AM
WAFFLE!
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	cheese.doodles 70.52.170.79	15-Mar-07/10:07 AM
very crude.
Re: gerbil by betty swallox	cheese.doodles 70.52.170.79	15-Mar-07/10:08 AM
The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a. This doesn't fit form, it's a-a-b-b-b. Yeah, and it's not very good.
Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	cheese.doodles 70.52.170.79	15-Mar-07/10:10 AM
This is so stupid.
Re: Through Your Frown by Blindpoetry	cheese.doodles 70.52.170.79	15-Mar-07/10:12 AM
No wonder you're lonely, your poetry is ass.
Re: No Love by Blindpoetry	cheese.doodles 70.52.170.79	15-Mar-07/10:13 AM
You wrote a beautiful song? I'm shocked! Are you capable of such things?
Re: When Fairy Tales Forgive Us by J.B. Manning	cheese.doodles 70.52.170.79	15-Mar-07/10:13 AM
This could probably be condensed into something vaguely interesting; as it is it's a little long.