regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 67.172.190.253	16-Feb-07/7:04 AM
thanks. but. no.
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Feb-07/8:05 AM
Along a similar theme: A bolus bearded wound of Rockmages A rampant herd of Dovinas A greasy slag of Bethys A splitarse of Katies
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 208.127.90.176	16-Feb-07/9:27 AM
The plural of “-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.” is “-=Darkies_Angel=-, Private In flagrante delicto.”
Re: a self-conscious lack of denial by nentwined	Dovina 208.127.90.176	16-Feb-07/9:39 AM
A couple of wines and all is fine.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 208.127.90.176	16-Feb-07/9:42 AM
too melodramatic, but a nice sentiment.
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	nentwined 76.167.62.172	16-Feb-07/11:31 AM
I'll take a Guiness, you pig! Cute. But doesn't do it for me. Minus a point for not having "fish" as per rockmage. Extra point for the word "Gortices".
regarding some deleted poem...	nentwined 76.167.62.172	16-Feb-07/11:32 AM
cherry blossom and wood, with a midnight encounter? clever, but they play against each other somewhat comically--or maybe that's just my mood. Gyring? Kudos if you actually meant it. Good "round and round and round". Overall, too plain. Carry the metaphors through?
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	richa 81.179.135.216	16-Feb-07/2:17 PM
Octopodes is my favourite.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.179.135.216	16-Feb-07/2:24 PM
It has a classical feel to it. Well constructed
Re: Complaints by jessicazee	richa 81.179.135.216	16-Feb-07/2:35 PM
I don't know what cocoa salt stains are. I'd stick with just cocoa stains. I like how you go back to his knee again to communicate its intermittent nature. I presume you have been chided for playing the fool with the shadow hands. 'it was the bear wasn't it?' is interesting. I read it as an innocent attempt to explain why your playful.ness had elicited complaint. It is difficult to get a grip of at first but it does make sense after a few reads.
Re: Lonely Hearts by Stephen Robins	richa 81.179.135.216	16-Feb-07/2:39 PM
Needs more acronyms.
Re: The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani	Ranger 81.103.124.179	16-Feb-07/3:09 PM
Possibly the best part of this poeme is the rhyming of 'anus' with 'gayness', although it seems to be more suited to a limerick: I've heard of a brown homo anus That travels the land spreading gayness O'er mountains and glades It runs, spreading AIDS Look out! It's come to bestain us!
Re: Yet more woe by Stephen Robins	Ranger 81.103.124.179	16-Feb-07/3:12 PM
Have you seen Otis Lee Crenshaw (Rich Hall) do his prison rape song?
Re: The Medium of Dunce by Ranger	drnick 24.176.22.254	17-Feb-07/9:23 AM
What is this shit? Just kidding. I like the repeated lines.
Re: Cat you cat by Tman	Tman 161.184.192.37	17-Feb-07/10:46 AM
great poem, I love cats.....
Re: Lonely Hearts by Stephen Robins	Dental Panic 84.85.206.227	17-Feb-07/1:44 PM
Sounds like flarf from any officecomputer. You can do better: so do better.
Re: Leg by jessicazee	half.italian 76.172.249.205	17-Feb-07/3:55 PM
I love your poetry.
Re: Les Imagistes by Nicholas Jones	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	18-Feb-07/8:08 AM
I would bet my right arm that no duck that has ever existed aside from maybe Donald, Daffy or Howard the duck has ever contemplated in any way the profundity of walking on water.
Re: Working Title by MacFrantic	Dovina 208.127.90.113	18-Feb-07/4:06 PM
I don't get it, as if it's to somebody in particular who knows the context. Maybe if you say what the working title is.
Re: Journey by madamefrufru	Dovina 208.127.90.113	18-Feb-07/4:12 PM
You might try commenting on more than one poem before posting another. This one is particularly lacking in particulars.