whoa.

I feel guilty now for every blowjob I have ever recieved.

Very well put.

Odd switch from third to first person at the beginning but interesting none the less. I think it could use some more work but its not bad. -6-

spoken like somebody whose been tokin, but do why can't you pass that shit? Cause the bunny wants a hit! -9-

Funny but, it seems to ryhme too much(if thats possible) -7-

I feel like that all the time, -0-

New handrinos in the world?? That's all we needed!! http://LOL. Best of luck to you and your new extension. If that's indeed what happened. I don't actually know.

The easterly wind carries much weight. When it gets where it is going it may carry hate. Tread lightly on foreign land. Say, I tweaked (my wife) care to peek? She likes it when I tweak her.

A poem(much as I hate to start this arguement again) is a group of words artfully aranged together to convey an Idea. At least thats the best I can figure it. By the way this is well done. -10-

I like the beginning but the rest doesnt really seem to follow, maybe you could throw in somthin like this I am escape from from your 9-5 ways. Just a fix for the saddest of days. Paradise isnt as it seems, In your lovely two car six figure dream. Somthin like that, anyways decent poem -7-

How about 'Orangutan' instead of 'Orangutans'? Beautiful.

Great poem. It's quite vague in some parts, then again it's hard to be specific on such a topic. I feel can really relate to lines 13 and on.

my my my. someone has been doing their homework. this rocks.

this poems bites hard: the lion's tooth loosed in too-warm air.

As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.

the short uncapped sentences really bring out the anger/frustration. interesting tool you have there. or lack thereof.

swank.

Utterly insane. I love you. -9-

Yeah I know Exactly how you feel. -10-