Poemranker [most recent comments (37401-37420)]

sir_heff on Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Apr 2003, 8:53 AM

many improtant lessons in this..... very good 10

Ranger on Romans 8 by Freethinker1602 23 Apr 2003, 11:33 AM

Just remember-there's always somebody who's got it worse. Could I put in a request for a happy poem? Not to worry, hee hee! Anyways, I like the ending here-I'll give it an 8 Good morning everybody (unless you're over here in which case Good evening)

richa on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23 Apr 2003, 10:20 AM

good rhyming I think this is key to this kind of writing

Ranger on Loss I havn't yet known by cleverdevice 23 Apr 2003, 11:19 AM

Hey cd how's it going? Have you revised anything yet? I most definitely haven't. Ah well. Nice poem, short (heh, it's a haiku), blunt and certainly true. It's already garnered a 7 so that shall be the standard by which I shall follow. Good Evening, sir!

Ranger on spring by <~> 23 Apr 2003, 11:23 AM

Hi z, it's nice to see you back-you haven't logged in for a few days from what I've seen. I was beginning to worry for you. Love the poem...it's perfect for a haiku (which I suppose is useful!) 9 I think would be a fitting score.

Ranger on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23 Apr 2003, 11:38 AM

Hey Mister Truck Driver dude, I read the other one you just posted but I don't have time to comment on both, but they're both cool! This one esp. I'm going to give this a 9 I'll be posting a new one soon-ish (hopefully) & would love it if you took a look and told me what you think to it! Cheers anyway!

lunar on some deleted poem 23 Apr 2003, 1:53 PM

Settle!!! why on earth did u change ur name to dark angel? This is going to be seroisly confusing for everone now you know!!

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23 Apr 2003, 7:31 AM

I don't get it man. What's so fucking beautiful about it?

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 23 Apr 2003, 7:34 AM

CHRIST RAPING BLACK METALLLLL

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on god damn P.D.A. by sir_heff 23 Apr 2003, 7:40 AM

NICE EMOTIONS NICE RHYME YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE IN NO TIME

Amelia on Romans 8 by Freethinker1602 23 Apr 2003, 7:45 AM

Sounds like a Kirk Franklin song. Spread the word Brother! :)

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on isms and ities by Amelia 23 Apr 2003, 7:49 AM

YOU FORGOT JISM

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose 23 Apr 2003, 7:53 AM

It's the truth. That's what holds more truth.

Amelia on Only in humility by mozac 23 Apr 2003, 7:54 AM

I don't mean to sound dumb but where exactly are you going with the poem? and are you trying to say Reminiscence or eminence in the third line from the last? I don't think reminence is correct.

Amelia on My Friend? by Blade 23 Apr 2003, 8:10 AM

strike 100! !!!!!barstards?????? It's bastards you ... (I shall refrain from insulting you further).

sir_heff on "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Apr 2003, 8:48 AM

very moving, i really like the last part about quoting your self befor you get to say anything :) when sobrioty blows... smoke a bowl. when reailty nocks.... turn your locks.

Caducus on some deleted poem 23 Apr 2003, 8:55 AM

You also let the reader in with this and its a very engaging, accessible poem. I disagree about the end it is not lost, that ride to the hills and the view from the top took me up there with you. 9

Caducus on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23 Apr 2003, 8:58 AM

With exception to that poem about you ripping the guts from the clock, this is your best, highly deserving all the praise. I've read 2 brilliant poems today and before thats spoiled I am logging off - 10 Cest Parfait

richa on spring by <~> 23 Apr 2003, 10:15 AM

I don't quite get its meaning, still i don't care much for meaning words are only an analog this could mean a million things all good

richa on some deleted poem 23 Apr 2003, 10:18 AM

enjoyable use of language but the upbeat rhyme a bit at odds with the sentiment perhaps?