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hipster flare on Got Balls? by Yardbird 13 Mar 2003, 9:42 AM
tasty. sounds chewy.
hipster flare on Pinjur by Shardik 13 Mar 2003, 9:46 AM
god with a small i. catchy.
hipster flare on Crucifixion by Mr Pig 13 Mar 2003, 9:30 AM
I like wine and bread, too.
hipster flare on Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29 13 Mar 2003, 9:47 AM
somebody bored? Don't like history class?
hipster flare on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni 13 Mar 2003, 9:48 AM
weak
hipster flare on Hippy's Ode to Eternity by bondjedi 13 Mar 2003, 9:31 AM
title stinks. first two lines are great. last is lacking.
lastobelus on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:32 AM
uhn. Nice. I'm Reeling.
hipster flare on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 13 Mar 2003, 9:33 AM
hooving rams crash horns
hipster flare on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:33 AM
lacks depth i think.
lastobelus on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:34 AM
buddaboom
hipster flare on Loud Taps by celiff 13 Mar 2003, 9:34 AM
title must go--eliminate redundancies--haiku is too short for repetition.
lastobelus on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:35 AM
doesn't work for me at all. Sorry, because you wrote dead boy and that haiku which were frikkin' excellent you must be punished for this one
hipster flare on Beer by Yardbird 13 Mar 2003, 9:38 AM
the title gives too much away and makes it ordinary.
lastobelus on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:38 AM
Apparently, pomeranker, in various states of decay.
hipster flare on Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles 13 Mar 2003, 9:39 AM
I get it.
hipster flare on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum 13 Mar 2003, 9:41 AM
what a chewy lumpo of dung. also not a haiku.
hipster flare on Coloured waifs home by horus8 13 Mar 2003, 9:44 AM
OK
hipster flare on Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29 13 Mar 2003, 9:45 AM
keep trying. avaoid cliche's that sound like elton john songs.
lastobelus on The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus 13 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
sweet s/there/their/ in stanza 3 line 3 before pk gets here and craps my nitpicks: stanza 2 line 1 bugs me because its awkward. why not just something like angels trick the cherubs into killing the stars. or angels corrupt the cherubs and they start killing stars. or something. and stanza 4 line 1. The rest of the poem is startlingly original, making "eyes bleed black" stand out for it's familiarity.
hipster flare on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer 13 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
work out redundancies...