nifty.

fast and good.

yeah, this works for me, especially the payoff.

Leo Horoscope (by Astrocenter.com) A selfish attitude on your part will not be tolerated today, regardless of the circumstances, dear Leo. Don't make it worse for yourself by pretending that you don't notice the hurt feelings of those around you. People are likely to be extra sensitive today, so be careful of trying to impose your will on someone who really just wants nothing more than an ear to talk to and a shoulder to cry on. Whoops, so much for that.lol.

"rough dewed welcome of time" tastes as good as the first fucking cup of coffee in the morning.

Sir, superman is not fat. www.gangbox.com I have abs of steel and finely crafted hair, and am good at generally, everything.thanks again. nice try. I once shot a mooseknuckle in the Yukon. I served it with a luke warm chiante Brandon. Also; I am surrounded by love, it is you that feels guilty, not i friend, it was your poem.lol. I have a healthy son, and no guilt. LOOK OUT BEHIND YOU! GOOD GOD THE MEWLING OF AN ANgRY FETUS! please. "Do as thou wilt is the whole of the law" Alister Crowely, Rush who? I'm an anarchist idiot not a fucking television personality, but if this was a debate... My friend you lost back at the angry fetus, unless of course you are John Carpenter and designing a new film called 'they're angry, tiny, and slippery' "Bitter Fetus III, the crawl back".

Can't you see that I am busy writing and posting poetry? Last time I checked that's what this forum was created for, and not for beaver sounding retards to insult poets. Here is a number 1-900-shoo, I am sure that they will talk to you. Maybe for $2.99/min but at least they will be willing to listen to you.

hello mr bub, some comments on yer pome: "surreptitiously. " too long/bland/erudite a word for this poem. it doesn't fit the gist of it. you're all about the things the simple and the simply arrogant want hhere--and besides, they are obvious in their avoidance, are they not? so why the word, bub? it confuses the issue. "prideful gnarled knuckles at the line-walkers passing above*,* snatch*es* the black woolen cap from his lap. " i know you're all about the grammar, so i thought i'd throw that at you. that being said, i like this very much. but your ending makes him a plant and not a man; by steailing his mobility, you steal his humanity. if by 'barrel' you mean to infer his thirst for the 80 proof, it does not work here.. ta, z

isn't sacharine supposed to come with a warning label? Oh. "A Best Friend". It did. My bad.

brandon, how old are you? please respond. z

You are an excellent poet!

If you don't mind my asking, what happened to your other eye?

"unicorns in the forest" but this is clearly a sign of a child hood molesting repressed into faiery tale symbolism. (i forget this one on my earlier list) i do like this poem though... it tastes like granola but has the texture of caviar? interesting.

This poem is clearly about seperatism, and how to fight against the evil with in one's sole "toilets overflow" "Jackson Pollock" "roll a blunt" "Josef Stalin" "cauldron" "shepherd's lithium" "How dare you claim me mad!" All quotes proving my point. Thank you folks, i'm here all night too.

umm. pardon me Brandon, could you possibly use a stronger metaphor here for the insulting snow? Because...Well...See if my boobs can't be evil and curved then your snow can't passive aggressively insulting. <AND THE CROWD GOES wild. Evil wins again!!!!!!!!!. I woulld like to thank Satan, Jews, and Television, also i wanna give a shout out to all of my aborted fetuses that secretely hate me. word. umm i'd like to thank my manager for putting up with my spontaneous nudity and wall knicking wheel chair activities, and last but not least i would like to thank the plague of the future. the crew of the space shuttle r.i.p. idiotic leaders and the ebola virus, and a Catholic church strewn and soaked in homosexuality and aids. (like that's a big surprise) This, unlike fetuses hating us from heaven, is a fact Brandon, and your future. Thank you folks i'm here all fucking day!

Oh doyle rules.

You're funny, somehow i recognize the writing a bit. Then again my mind is an odd device i recognize everything and nothing. take an 8, because i just can't tell anymore.

You wrote up a good image here. One lucky guy to be sitting opposite you. Not too long and right to the point, nice writing!

You're a great poet, and a 7.5! You are a composer, really? Did not like your music too much. Sorry. You sound like a beaver being gang raped. I bet that's how you got the name gang box, smart guy. With an IQ of 54, you really don't impress me. Go write some more impressive poetry now. shooo

raw, breathless, daring