Ranger
on OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird
10 Jan 2003, 4:00 AM
Marvellous
geee....what was that all about?
Hahahahahahahaha.
cleverdevice
on OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird
10 Jan 2003, 3:25 AM
Oh yes, seven years in tibet 2 I think.
How do make a baby float?
Take your foot off his head!
cleverdevice
on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria
10 Jan 2003, 3:32 AM
Yeah, and remember guys, on the first date, there is a fine line between persistance and stalking! And they don't like that sexy breathing down the phone either!
Did it start to sprout? Or should that be; "Dide itte beginne to sproutte, dearre sir?"
I like the twee self censorship of blocking out your own swearwords. My, how Derrida would laugh!
Kicking piece
Utter tripe. You need to be shot. Or worse.
I love this its kind of eerie very atmospheric -10
Dont get the point writing about something you dont know what your writing about, interesting opening but no narrative and redundant of any specific point -5-
Very to the point, short and sweet -6-
welcome to poemranker
Oh my god this must have taken ages you poor thing. Have a 7 for shocking me with keyboard art
I wouldn't say this is particularly poignant or heart wrenching but its faily well told and from the heart so a worthy 7, i too have written of loss (a lot)
Absolutely the most basic form of expression used, unimaginative and lazy, nothing personal but this is trailer park poetry -4-
If you find your way out of your own ass heres your vote.......2
Quite sweet, a good effort much better than celebrating yourself here is a 7
Thought this was a bit anonymous on a 1st read but I keep reading it and more reactions follow each time. i will vote soon