Caducus
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 8:56 AM
Klingon to it, i like it
I vote 1 for my joke and 7 for your poem
Quite Moving and a very credible stanza 2-4 ========8 tears---
victims and masters of our own disasters
Original, I love poems that have lines like yours' the hat you made me wear for school -the one that was itchy' its so true to life and representative of childhood memories, this makes me want to eat my mums crap xmas cake just coz i love her ===8=
USER INTRANSIT, wrote a line about ripping the guts from a grandfather clock, i cant recall the title but you would like that poem of his (ask him). This was quite intelligently written, and i think a 3 votes a bit negative, maybe do this as a haiku ? think of some choice lines **6**
this is well written, and i to favour power poetry and rhyme (saw your details) i think the sword needs to go back in the scabbard as it needs a little sharpening, what is your point? it seems a little all over the place. -05-
Bravo Sir, this is vivid, started strong and ended strong, making a good use of a philosophy without pretentiosness -7-
Wanting to forgive
but can't let go
pride is taking over the love.
*****how true is that***
I like !
No Mistake its frui tree:
the mouth of Pearl River. Dongguan abounds in lychee frui trees, rice noodles, crabs, sausage, grass-woven handicrafts. The Dongguan Lychee Festival...
http://www.chinatravelone.com/english/de
Haunting/quite touching, An inconclusive ghost story 'tim burtonesque' in style
ah! gazania! such beautiful patterns and colors--each different! and, responsive to the warmth and light of the sun, folding herself up at night, demurely. excellent choice!
and iris--delicate, fragrant, so temporary. nice.
3rd to last line--should it be 'now' instead of 'know'?
the thing that distracts me right off the bat is the apostrophe in "eyes" that should be there. not to mention the "your" that should be "you're." this has a nice flow. i have no idea what it's saying, but i don't really care either because of the way it moves. 8 swastikas!
You have many a string to your bow, and this split the arrow,
bring The hooded man the maid
(applause from the sherriff and nottinghams peasants)
mama mia,
cara mia
i'm not sure what you mean here:
Mother in me, she alone
has the attributes.
10/10
5 ?
who voted 5?
goto poemrankerforbrailusers.com.
this aint no 5 !
Man !
Either did I till puberty.
good poeme
marvelous.
simply marvelous.
I luurve wimmins!