hobojo
on Come Night time by anitawit
22 Nov 2002, 9:45 AM
Pretty
Very amusing
neither. it's the figure four leg lock by greg the hammer valentine.
Well now, I shall put it here. Considering Mr. Elliot, a Misery boy if there ever was one, wrote a plethora of obscure material, none of which , racist and all, made it to the London and New York stage, why would you choose one of the most well known ditties in his arsenal? And why compare yourself to the now deceased God's Wife who, due to yet another monthly bloodletting, has packed her poems and pulled an Amelia on us all. So you tell me who is the Gwen and who is the poet, besides neither in this case.
I always like your poetry, Lynn, but this is one of two that you've written that I have printed out and in my cubicle at work so I can read them regularly.
It is a sin to believe in evolution.
Please write more in this vein. More poemes should involve the phrase "That is bunk".
Limericks rock. I like this.
If anyone is still wondering why I ironically chose the name '-=Dark_Angel=-', please observe.
Unless this person is a second-order troll, which I doubt.
O excellent!
I like it. the sand in the wrinkled palm
'the dream we are in dreams itself to be free'- anything to do with the theory of 'maya'?
So where's the load of bollocks?
You seem to have been inspired and it shows, I was wondering if the little pinpoints of light were the eyes of a dormouse about to be slaughtered in the matrix?
This is really good but its very similar to 'Come Nightime' I think you should remove one and enter one of them later, different beasts with the same growl.
I think its the end !
For your keyboard that is, for Xmas I will buy you an enter button
and a spring
This has made me think for some reason of those creepy porcelain dolls with glass oval eyes.
Explain Tintageles the shadow of her porcelain heart theirs so many theories going on about that line in my head but i havent been able to connect them yet?
This is up there with 'Holmganga', and reading your work is a requiem of literary pleasure, you are truly talented and you should take your work further.
O.B. Wan has taught you well.
I didnt know Diana was latin for moon, and Endymion was a beautiful young man loved by the moon. so I guess a title for your poem could be Endymions lover or 'Interlunium' (change of moon)
Anyway 10/10 most of your poems blow me away.
Very good