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vulcan on Stars Of The Sky by GTK 15 Nov 2002, 2:44 AM
it's nice.one likes to recite it on some occasions.7
vulcan on An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29 15 Nov 2002, 2:42 AM
I think if you use past tense(fighted/proved)the sense of nothingness will become more oppressing in the poem.
vulcan on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2002, 2:49 AM
it's intersting.7
Caducus on Stars Of The Sky by GTK 15 Nov 2002, 1:38 AM
too sugary, post an angry poem
Nicholas Jones on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2002, 3:30 AM
Not as good as part one. You're losing your touch. I can't help it that my encyclopaedic knowledge of popular culture enabled me to spot your plagiarism. By the way, Tom Jones is a twat.
Nicholas Jones on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2002, 3:26 AM
Abraham Lincoln didn't fart. Nor does the Queen. I'm not sure if Tony does or not. Alistair Campbell certainly does.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on "so called" reality by jonny2000 15 Nov 2002, 12:15 AM
no, and if we did? what would you do then...eat the blue pill and join dogstar with mr. reeves? why does a bum shopping cart the recycling bin...if there's no hope...to buy dope to cope? nay...to tongue hole the flat pop...before the ants do.
i'm going to give you a nine on this...be proud..i normally tear the fuck out of everybody just out of sheer distemperment. why? hardcore denial my friend, and alot lot more...this made me care about life again on certain levels, and i choose to cover the girls name at the bottom, replace it with mine, and pretend it was a note to me from someone who held me along time ago....but no more is that...no more...is me. 9. boo-hoo. col! lol! col!dol!bol!wol!
<{Baba^Yaga}> on e-mail from a friend by josh_5o 15 Nov 2002, 12:19 AM
right!?try....laying on the freeway and counting differential gears...works every time.7.
Caducus on The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss 15 Nov 2002, 1:20 AM
Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh
Caducus on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2002, 1:23 AM
it cracked me up !
Caducus on You wouldn't Accept by GTK 15 Nov 2002, 1:36 AM
Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
vulcan on An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29 15 Nov 2002, 2:40 AM
very much like "sanity's defeat".but I guess there's no more a "one day".it's for that 'he's tombstone.7
vulcan on Determination by Birdman42s 15 Nov 2002, 2:57 AM
yes!sounds decisive.it's really good.yes you've lost the rhythm in last line I can say.10.maybe the last satanza has no problem.but is less powerful than the rest of it.
Yardbird on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15 Nov 2002, 3:06 AM
Yet more proof that your poems suck arse. Leave this site now, while you still habe a shred of dignity.
Yardbird on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15 Nov 2002, 3:09 AM
Your'e a tasteless homophobe, you can't write worth a damn, and you're a right royal arsewipe. I'd stick a positive comment in there somewhere, but I can't seem to find one...
Yardbird on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2002, 3:11 AM
I get your drift......it's all good (bwa ha ha)...!
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Sisters of mercy by strider1 15 Nov 2002, 12:17 AM
next.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Sisters of mercy by strider1 15 Nov 2002, 12:17 AM
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vulcan on The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss 15 Nov 2002, 2:33 AM
nice!8