Roll on.

The Jesus parts make it wonderful. Not so sure about the rest.

I wouldn't mind the single line so much if you spelt well. Please tell me that 'houlisanating' wasn't just a typo, but supposed to mean something.

Epic. Like that needed to be said. I like the touch and go feeling. This ones gonna last.

Brilliant. I also agree. Kids today are far too coddled. Damn political correctness to the seventh circle of hell.

Is candy all you ever talk about?

Too many exclamation marks, among other things. Far too many. Especially since they're useless.

'My "Hap"'? What the hell is a hap?

Are you an alchoholic? Drink is omni-present. Good again, great even. I secretly hate you. May we exchange DNA?

"the master and margureitte" (i fucking love michael bulgakov)....you are a splendid writer, and thank god your an artist who drinks 'these kids now adays' have straight edged themselves into lack luster culdesacs of internet pooey, but you my friend are old school and fucking gifted...that's why i despise you. good night, 9.

profundo basso! my favorite was always the 'other mary m. besides carpentry can only solve so much.E

Fetal. A few more weeks in the womb and this one will be able to breath on it's own. Refine your parlance.

Oh my oh my oh my. To find myself hidden among rotting blades. Joey just asked me what m-a-s-o-c-h-i-s-m spells.

Hmmm... quite good. Though I confess I find it might actaually work better if it WAS written without line breaks, and simply presented as a prose poem, which is a quite acceptable (even vaguely respectable) form, despite what a lot of people will say.

Def-Leppard fan? Wouldn't change much,can't find where.....7

This seems unfinished,unanswered. I'm sorry for the loss.8

I hope you get to this comment. I've got Isaac Hayes playing and I read it again. I saw it. wow.

'Your name scrawled three thousand times across my walls' is marvelous.

I'm going to assume you meant 'the only reasonable thing'.

Good flow! Nailed the 5-7-5! What season is it?