Robert K Foster
on #12 by mikejedw
17 Sep 2002, 6:20 AM
nicely done once again
Robert K Foster
on Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Sep 2002, 7:07 AM
an effective, whimsical title.
very nice indeed. keenly perceptive and succinct.
very nice indeed. keenly perceptive and succinct.
excellent.
5-7-7 -- interesting (but possibly unnecessary) variation...
been there. I had to rubber-band my thumb with a paper towel to apply direct pressure as I drove myself to the hospital for stitches.
interesting variation of line length.
Robert K Foster
on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Sep 2002, 5:57 AM
vile. an assassination of an art form.
it has a real "boot scootin' boogie" feel to it.
nice freeform--perhaps mislabeled as haiku?
oooooh. that's so refreshingly nice compared to many others. a 10 for you!
nicely done.
a hunger inducing poem. I like my sausage burnt, too.
I strongly believe that one should not judge a poet's personal life and attitudes based on the poem--that poetry can be as separate from the poet as it can be an intimate reflection of the inner soul.
That said- I still think this is crap and you should be ashamed of yourself.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 6:16 AM
how the hell can there be 41 comments and no votes! it's unheard of. and two other things: and my mother's a fish. which chapter is that? (dead as a mackerel.) anything with lesbian overtones can't be all bad.
not sure about the ";"
nicely stated. I too have grown sick of the overabundance of lark's vomit.
OK