-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2002, 2:29 PM
LOL WELL THAT SURE WAS FUNNY!!!!!
"Be distracted..." confuses me, and "Consider the skin tone" makes me wince a little.
GOTT!what a dangerous poem!but the blue eyes!ha!6
You obviously haven't spent much time on this. It fails in at least three and a half different ways. The Duke will be most disappointed.
man, this makes me wish i had AIDS so i could laugh my pain away...or at least compare notes. Anywhosamabob, well thought out in your comical genuis...may the taboo never lose you.PS--has it been 23.2 years already?
Hi Christof!what have you done with your"Preconceptual"?you had such a poem or I dreamed it?just then I wanted to read it again and found it disapeared!It was very good!H'm!please tell me the reason
Is this to me? I am so flattered you took the time to get out the dictionary and think of me. It is much more of an honor than having a simple smile from a writer of pimple poems. Shouldn???t you be in school or is it recess? love p&k
ZERO! How stupid. You could have at least posted something that few people would recognize. You did not write this, therefore you should get no credit for it. The poem gets a 2 for being moderately amusing, but you get a zero for claiming it as yours. Unbelievable.
Again, another poem you did not write. How stupid can one person be?! Blatant plagiary, not just once, but twice!
This is a very interesting poem. I'd give it a 1/10 JK!! I'll give it a 7/10 =) <3 katie
i hate people that sit down with their thesaurus when writing. it's too easy to notice too, noone really speaks like this. i like your poem, but come on, stop trying to impress people and just write. 3
nice, nice, short and sweet, and to the point. Hmm..maybe we can meet and try that out?? JK! LoL nice poem! =) 10/10!! <3 Katie
Just think if you outlive her the choices you will have. The old folks homes have 4/1 ration of women to men!!!! Excellent last stanza. And no flipping birds.
Nice poem, and you had a very nice flow of words =)"croyer dans lequel
flot de po??sie" =)"je donnent un dix" and No 'dix' doesn't mean 6.
ich denken er hat ein zeigen dort, du wissen" you proclaim you know German, so tell me what does that mean?
Love is a verb. The act of loving someone is far more noble and necessary than the sensation. Other than that, this poem is awkward at best. The rhymns are childish.
'he was called a spack / behind his back'. smooth.