hmm?

Seus is always a favorite.

Huh?(contemplates...)

"for every day of my life" doesn't scan right. and what's up with rhyming "arse" with "ass"?

a good last stanza. everything else read a bit awkwardly; I think I'd like it as just the last.

decent if overly simplistic. the "age-ins" doesn't seem to go with the rest of the poem's presentation.

aw, that's really sweet. :) shucks. :)

short/naught? why the allcaps?

a nice ending to the poem. I really didn't like "The Unknown Infinity". s2 and s3 felt to me like they could use some work.

I hate roses. (suiters -> suitors). a decent poem, though.

I read this once a long time ago. I like it, today. I don't think I did then. I must be in an oddly good mood.

hilarious but wrong, oh so wrong. :)

"beautiful" doesn't scan right. "And I stopped for none" doesn't scan right, either. your ending, "because you are the ONE" really hurts the piece, I think.

DA and GW, kissing in a tree, s. i. t. t. i. n. g.!!!

For some reason I find this both funny and sweet.

dude! that's really fucking beautiful. I'm not one to read through a long poem, generally, but damn. :) thank you. Sure, it's a bit overdone, and there are a few awkward scanning bits, but it's really fucking well done. (I recommend you try to publish it somewhere... nfg.ca would probably take it...)

add 'nd' to the 'a' between big and strong. Keep being proud.

Hmmm...

lol

Sheesh!