Re: Advertising says: by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	6-Mar-05/7:17 AM
Why isn't different an adverb?
Re: A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp	Plaidypus 68.14.27.48	6-Mar-05/9:31 AM
I really enjoyed this poem!!
Re: The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp	Plaidypus 68.14.27.48	6-Mar-05/9:32 AM
Agreed!
Re: The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp	Plaidypus 68.14.27.48	6-Mar-05/9:34 AM
their should be spelled "there", just to let you know. Also, "loose" should be "lose"
Re: a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle	i_am_the_popsicle 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/3:42 PM
its a shame when a group of poets cannot stand a contrarian view, and then on top of it, completely miss the point of a poem -emyln
Re: ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	LintyWeenis 205.188.117.9	6-Mar-05/3:50 PM
I found it funny, am I wrong?
Re: Decay by INTRANSIT	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:27 AM
i absolutely love this! i honestly have no idea why but i sense a brilliance in it! - 10 -
Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:28 AM
i love this it doesnt make much sense to me but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway - 10 -
Re: Foreplay by INTRANSIT	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:38 AM
i like this - 8 -
Re: The Escape by Geschäftsreise	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:41 AM
um why dont you write a story not a poem, because this comes across as very unskilled and choppy but you might to nicely if you make it into a short story
Re: one moment to the other by nentwined	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:44 AM
i like this alot -9- your word choice was very nice
Re: ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	MacFrantic 205.188.116.67	5-Mar-05/8:59 PM
Good
Re: a dialouge between a pessimst and a young child by whispern_smoke_wisp	LintyWeenis 205.188.117.9	6-Mar-05/3:56 PM
Dialogue between a broken record player and a child perhaps. -you are not a genius- I know you are but what am I? Doesn't do it for me. Who knows, maybe I'm missing the point completely. I hope I am.
Re: Of Pride and Climate by MacFrantic	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/5:55 PM
i really like this
Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/5:59 PM
i hope that the point of this simply went over my head and that it isnt as bad as i think it is - 5 -
Re: Oh! To be pressed against your windowpane by skaskowski	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/6:00 PM
i like it - 8 -
regarding some deleted poem...	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/6:03 PM
i love it - 10 - !
Re: Fastso by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.106	6-Mar-05/9:41 PM
Must U rite such gay poems allathe time? Do you know that they make lipstick out of suet? "suety gang..."
regarding some deleted poem...	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/11:01 PM
If you could haiku it, 10. As is, 9. I re-read 4 times.
Re: The Privaleged by i_am_the_popsicle	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/11:06 PM
spelling problems: priveleged luxury coerced 7.9 regardless