Do your twat really smells bad???

This is a passable poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

This is a dreadful poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

This is a fucking obscene poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

This is a dreary poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

This is a crappy yet lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

This is a pathetic poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

This is a hideous poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

excellent picture of the inside-outside dichotomy of the public's obsession with beauty, fame, and personality---lohan is a public creation: image over substance every time. good work!!

This is a totally fabbo poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you; you would be much appreciated there.....

This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....

Lesbian manhater poetry? What utter rubbish. You smell like someones embrowned poop deck.

You are not fit to breathe. The only website where the horsedung you excrete might be found amusing is http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum where everyone else is also a total cunt.

I dig this. But check your punctuation...i.e. "I'll (line 11), it's (13), that's (14), it's (16), etc., and a few typos ("all the little things that I made me leave"). Dang, I'm a nitpicky editor monster now, but I only take the time because with some editing you've got something here. 8.

Sticky thud/hammer stuns. Totally.

Make it less about you (i.e. "I") and let someone else dance to a cosmic beat. Love it. 9.

"red rain dress" is a wonderment, maybe like me, you just walk a lot and get wet. "worm elastic" is cute. That hat wont help against rain. S4 is strange, and strangely punctuated. S5 pulls it together, except the tag is again, strange.

ok, nice rhythm, ok rhyme. What's the point?

[10] as anonymous. I was having a hard day at the office and when I came to poetry ranker, this was the random poem that it threw at me. Every line resonated within. Dont know why :)