Re: Lady Bradbury’s Excursion by Dovina	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	16-Jan-05/9:29 PM
interesting.................
regarding some deleted poem...	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	16-Jan-05/9:31 PM
i really like this......... -mega
Re: Lemons Don't Grow by Blindpoetry	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	16-Jan-05/9:34 PM
intersing......... -mega
Re: Bad-Ass Mudder-Fugger by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	MacFrantic 64.12.116.67	17-Jan-05/11:09 AM
put it under concrete and you've got a *9*
Re: Vulture by Stacy Stewart	Shuushin 64.222.180.230	16-Jan-05/8:50 PM
how bout a couple line breaks there? An observation: in places you omit a word, apparently because it isn't needed - and I agree with that philosophy, but in others you pack in little extra ones as if you get paid by the letter (the first three words for starters, the on nearly every line, the first two or three. Clean that crap out and it won't be so pants.
Re: What A Little spark Can Do by Blindpoetry	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	16-Jan-05/9:38 PM
nice.................very simple yet elegant........like (to steal the examples above) a nicely crafted cabinet............lol.............. -mega
regarding some deleted poem...	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	16-Jan-05/9:49 PM
um......okay then........................
Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	16-Jan-05/9:52 PM
wow.......blows my mind..........this is so ultimately excellent............10!!!!!! -mega
Re: Recognition by nentwined	Caducus 172.189.154.57	17-Jan-05/2:37 AM
You've managed to create one of those sayings like twain or wilde and done so in the limits of a haiku so brrrravo its def one of the best on here.
Re: Rendered Genderless by PsydewaysTears	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:41 AM
Can you write a rhyme without it being a total nonsequitor? I bet not. The best part was the ham bit.
Re: In The Beginning by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:42 AM
I'm displeased to find you're back to your old self-righteousness. You were better when you didn't have all the answers. Kind of lovable, even, like a hamster.
Re: Rendered Genderless by PsydewaysTears	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:45 AM
PS-I was expecting to read a poem about being rendered genderless, which I've always imagined being able to do on some impermanent basis. Unless by "eat the ham" you mean something below my capacity for contemplation, this is not even close.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:50 AM
Living in a non-English-speaking country, I've become fascinated recently by what constitutes English-speakers' ideas about alien sounds. In short, "zort" is good, but "zortrellon" is an fake Italian soft-porn director. Incidentally, most alien languages on TV sound like Arabic, which (and this is true) was devised in order to communicate with camels. I mean that.
Re: American Semele (Edit) by Sasha	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:52 AM
This would have been better if it was "American Smell". What is the American Smell? Bacon and shag carpet.
Re: Rendered Genderless by PsydewaysTears	tangerinepuddle 69.240.74.35	17-Jan-05/8:21 AM
you know I love this one, but I do agree with dancin n da moonlight's comment....doesn't need to go on quite as long
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	17-Jan-05/8:32 AM
It's a nice message, and sometimes it's good to hear it. Doesn't mean we need a slew of "I'm okay, you're okay" poems, but the timing for this one was good. Much appreciated.
Re: Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	17-Jan-05/8:40 AM
I'll have to look up the connection between michael moore and bands - brb
Re: Bad-Ass Mudder-Fugger by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	dancin_n_da_moonlite 64.12.116.135	17-Jan-05/10:58 AM
this is computer art......not poetry... -mega
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.7	17-Jan-05/8:57 AM
I think you misspelled "pppp9ooooi88i77uuu'-'yuy677777777775666 666 666 666 666. -10-
Re: A Picture For Danny by Caducus	dancin_n_da_moonlite 64.12.116.135	17-Jan-05/11:05 AM
wow........this is so good............. -mega