Re: Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away by Tara57	Dovina 69.175.6.101	5-Nov-04/4:18 PM
elitists needs an apostrophe. split wine? There's your daggered words.
Re: Sunrise by Aetius	Dovina 69.175.6.101	5-Nov-04/4:47 PM
A nice comparison. It feels right.
regarding some deleted poem...	IcHronit 168.28.203.194	4-Nov-04/4:08 PM
a flame whisper. is this an image of your style? oh the water is drinking from the eyes of the well.
Re: Perfect Time of Year by wilco	Dovina 69.175.6.101	4-Nov-04/3:13 PM
Fall IS the perfect time of year in Tennessee, but to say that it is different, if not for lack of change, brings up images of good ol' boys, a holler an' 'shine.
Re: 10.25.04 by oneglove	Dovina 69.175.6.101	4-Nov-04/3:27 PM
A nice image - man/woman, moon/sun - long dance before the eclipse when she graciously accepts. How about a line break after anew? And "ill-fated" seems wrong with all we know about orbits. The lunar eclipse was on 10/27/04, and you seem to be talking about a solar eclipse, so why the title?
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	edpeterson 68.79.60.123	5-Nov-04/5:06 PM
The lawn christ I did beard with a few gems that were browne as poo poo They shone like his eyes He, to no ones surprise, looked and smelled like a rich migrant jew
regarding some deleted poem...	IcHronit 168.28.203.194	4-Nov-04/4:07 PM
"he was so plump and round and i loved him from every angle, and he was my march of time my most effective line he was my helplessness, my fear. Queer how the snarl on his lip endeared right until the end, and i have never known a lie and i have never known a friend, never nothing really until this very moment when, now i know it all, all, all as free and sickening as the fall." Get away with this gay shits. "Queer how snarl" what in the hell is this sucka shit?. losing your mind. lack of emotions. oh this one is not from the heart. is merely a soup opera for gay men. beautiful poem. this is great. dam anyway is a piece of loaded crap. make no sense at all. shot me if you can. I am poet iam poet.
Re: Neil Simon is Living in My Lunula by MacFrantic	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	4-Nov-04/5:10 PM
I think this should be classified as 'Other'.
Re: 10.25.04 by oneglove	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	4-Nov-04/5:14 PM
On 10.25.04, while you were gallavanting about in pursuit of the ultimate lewd, I was at home soaking my mulberries in the oils of clove. If only you could boast of time similarly well spent, my lad.
Re: Grandma by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.14.53	4-Nov-04/8:09 PM
Yeah, as one's senses dull with age, it seems that the only thing one still feels strongly as it did in youth is pain. Pain changes from "growing pains" to "growing older pains."
Re: Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away by Tara57	edpeterson 68.79.60.123	5-Nov-04/5:09 AM
i can hear the crickets chirping. listen. can you hear it too?
Re: Intersection by INTRANSIT	nentwined 66.92.183.34	5-Nov-04/9:17 PM
hello again. :)
Re: Bird (Yang) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	IcHronit 168.28.203.194	4-Nov-04/2:17 PM
Very nice. Good job.
Re: Cunt by Jeremi B. Handrinos	IcHronit 168.28.203.194	4-Nov-04/2:26 PM
"Casting men up mountains to moan alone with one another under hood." what is this? a lost in denial. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. shits shits shits shits. stupider stupid. This poem is great. BUT I THINK IT STINKS AND FILTHY. DIRTY MIND. DAM !
Re: Pro Forma by Jeremi B. Handrinos	IcHronit 168.28.203.194	4-Nov-04/2:30 PM
A banboon fart across the moon troubling the weaken world and it's core our eyes gazed upon to fear haiku haiku is nice. butyours make no sense at all. dream on poet dream on poet dream on.
Re: The Mushrooms' Song by zodiac	IcHronit 168.28.203.194	4-Nov-04/2:37 PM
good write
Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	IcHronit 168.28.203.194	4-Nov-04/2:40 PM
aids aids you nothing about aids.
Re: ishte ishta by IcHronit	edpeterson 68.79.60.123	5-Nov-04/9:14 AM
you should try to work some AIDS into the poem. That would really give that extry cutting edge.
Re: Dear Bartleby by Blurred Crusade	Dovina 69.175.6.101	5-Nov-04/10:53 AM
A fine archaic letter, as if written a hundred years ago. Not a poem, really, but it shows us just enough to get the point. I'd vote 10 if this were a letters site.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.20.71	5-Nov-04/12:46 PM
I tried to beard Christ with a money shot, slath'ring him thick with my "honey". But to my surprise, It went in his eyes, Which he didn't think was 'tall funny.