Re: An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo	donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211	1-Jul-04/6:16 AM
I like the flow, but have
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	1-Jul-04/11:44 AM
Yes, it's been said over and over, but if you'd shroud it in some tricky prose or metaphor we'd gush all over you.
Re: Helo everybody is limerck time!! by DR Limerick	Dovina 24.52.157.176	1-Jul-04/2:32 PM
Funny. Why the ?? at the end?
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 65.161.41.48	1-Jul-04/9:52 AM
Once, while staying at a hotel in Mexico City with my wife, I became so ill from the tapwater that I used two rolls of toilet paper per day for an entire week. By the time I was finally able to leave the hotel room, I'd lost 15 pounds. PS-Do you think that as a simile "X is utterly unlike Y" is as good or useful as "X is like Y"?
regarding some deleted poem...	tolstoyleo 65.151.232.159	1-Jul-04/10:42 AM
It was a bit jumpy for me towards the middle, but overall I liked it. I gave it a -7-
regarding some deleted poem...	tolstoyleo 65.151.232.159	1-Jul-04/10:45 AM
I thought it was a pimple poem without the rhyme. I have seen this topic over and over again, written in angst by teenage girls. Frankly I'm sick of this topic. But... opinions are like farts...
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.209.124	1-Jul-04/12:23 PM
(so much) kind of redundant. (i n f o r m a t i o n) spaced seems almost entirely pointless. Other than that ace. The voice is especially clear.
Re: Recycled Stardust by Quarton	Dovina 24.52.157.176	1-Jul-04/1:35 PM
Good Title. Good ending. In the middle, you have some good lines, but the flow bogs in side issues and themes not very well connected to the main story. Not that they don't connect, I'd just work on how you connect them. Especially like, "when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again."
Re: Center Of The Universe by Dovina	Quarton 12.217.221.61	1-Jul-04/1:54 PM
How true is your observation. We tend to view the world from a very narrow and self-centered position. All things are inter-related and connected but this fact is largely unconsidered. Even an insect should be left alone if it is not bothersome. Well done.
Re: Lady Bradbury’s Excursion by Dovina	Quarton 12.217.221.61	1-Jul-04/2:19 PM
Very clever and humorous. Original for sure. A nine in my opinion.
Re: An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo	donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211	1-Jul-04/6:16 AM
have no clue what its about, tell me
Re: The Missing Peace by nothingtoanyone	tolstoyleo 172.197.181.253	1-Jul-04/2:11 AM
At first I thought this was one of those: "What am I?" poems... and I hate those.
regarding some deleted poem...	donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211	1-Jul-04/6:20 AM
i like, that you write how you feel. very nice
regarding some deleted poem...	donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211	1-Jul-04/6:22 AM
I like it very much
regarding some deleted poem...	tolstoyleo 172.197.181.253	1-Jul-04/2:13 AM
-0- FROM ME. THEY ALL SUCKED. Here is the definition of a haiku taken from this very site: The haiku is a japanese poetry form, evolved from the renga during the 16th century. It is a three line, unrhymed set of seventeen syllables (5-7-5). It is typically a pair of contrasting concrete/sensory images, with each image so dependant on the other that the whole thing collapses if one word is altered.
Re: When the night completes by donmiguel1960	tolstoyleo 172.197.181.253	1-Jul-04/2:15 AM
I thought this was going to end in "What am I?" To which I was going to reply: A lizard in the desert But that didn't happen
Re: The Curlew's Cry (Yr alwad y Gylfinir) by Blurgerocity	tolstoyleo 172.197.181.253	1-Jul-04/2:50 AM
The category is free verse but I found myself going: ababcc ababcc while readin it. But... I thought it was alright. I gave it an 8
regarding some deleted poem...	donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211	1-Jul-04/6:26 AM
explain the last line please
Re: What is a midget? by tolstoyleo	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.135	1-Jul-04/8:04 AM
Absurdly naïve, unforgivably childish and appallingly lewd.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 65.161.41.48	1-Jul-04/9:37 AM
Stupid, stupid.