| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/11:19 AM |
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to truly refuse to accept my last comment would be to not reply to it. you replied. this act implies acceptance. You, in light of this overwhelming evidence, DO accept my comment.
you are swelling nicely in your stew, which simmers fancifully around your browne sides. you are almost ready. I am beginning to salivate at the prosepect of having a nibble.
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
Rainbow_chaser 70.50.62.135 |
9-Mar-05/11:06 AM |
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you are a close minded judgemental person from what i see. So quick to assume your high up on the ladder... well i begg to differ and i refuse to accept your last comment.
I am not incompetant, i lack much schooling yes, but to jump to incompetant, sheesh.
so i will repeat what i stated in my last comment, sad, so very sad.
~Autumn
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/10:50 AM |
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YOu are a dumpling that lives in the fetid stew of your own incompetence.
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| Re: Deja-Vu by Rainbow_chaser |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
9-Mar-05/9:49 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Disfigure by DevilBuni |
DevilBuni 149.152.192.18 |
9-Mar-05/9:17 AM |
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What do you mean by fleshed out? Like add more?
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
Rainbow_chaser 70.50.62.135 |
9-Mar-05/8:37 AM |
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ahh you incorrectly imply that i live in the box ;). never my friend NEVER!
As for the robots, like hell!
free will must be honored for thos whom choose to find comfort in the box, sad but true.
And have you really acomplished anything in live if you have never put forth the effort?
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| Re: How to make a suicide bomber by Caducus |
Rainbow_chaser 70.50.62.135 |
9-Mar-05/8:34 AM |
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ahh the world is over runn with heartlessness, a poem that holds a fraction of events that occur daily, and then others sit by and judge without understanding.
so sad.
~Autumn
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| Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL |
Rainbow_chaser 70.50.62.135 |
9-Mar-05/8:20 AM |
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well im not sure what to say here, its a well writen poem, hats off to that. can say im supper big on the shallowness i felt while reading this one tho.. i still say 8 for the lay out and poem.
~Autumn
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| Re: A Blind Child Speaks by Grandma |
Rainbow_chaser 70.50.62.135 |
9-Mar-05/8:14 AM |
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i think this little poem is very sweet, and holds much truth. thank you for sharing.
blessings
~Autumn
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| Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33 |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/7:29 AM |
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NO! Don't eat that burger, Don't eat that ice cream!
Give it to me!
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| Re: a comment on eat what you want. by burgerking33 |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/7:28 AM |
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do you think that the poems written by CLS are good?
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| Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/7:22 AM |
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one pause to mimic....
I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
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| Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/7:20 AM |
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no. portentous is the adj form. portentously would be the adv form.
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| Re: a comment on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/7:12 AM |
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wait a minute. I had no idea you were trying to pass this off as a poeme. -10-
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| Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.14.182 |
9-Mar-05/7:07 AM |
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An example of the objective, serious and helpful criticism you've so often claimed.
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| Re: a comment on Beetwen by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.14.182 |
9-Mar-05/7:00 AM |
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That's low. Even lower than your usual name calling.
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| Re: a comment on Beetwen by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.14.182 |
9-Mar-05/6:57 AM |
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Even you were able to read this. It's even easier than I thought. Of course, you want me to spell out every detail of the process for you.
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| Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 12.72.14.182 |
9-Mar-05/6:48 AM |
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Portly is obviously not what he meant! Notice that obviously is from an noun/adjective. And, yes, portent can be an adjective, as if it makes a diddly difference.
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| Re: a comment on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
edpeterson 68.79.52.31 |
9-Mar-05/6:46 AM |
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my email address is on my home page
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| Re: a comment on Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro |
Dovina 12.72.14.182 |
9-Mar-05/6:44 AM |
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Oviously, it was not on your merits. Did you look at their voting records? They didn't have time to even read your poems before voting. Do you know these idiots?
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