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horus8 on Into My World by sliver 21 Dec 2004, 4:34 PM

Any fuck that cries on a rose, and then tries to turn it into shit poetry should be SHOT.

Dovina on Horror at the grotto by scitz 21 Dec 2004, 4:14 PM

funny, sad

nentwined on This chaotic mind by Bobjim 21 Dec 2004, 3:49 PM

You did an amazing job or horrible rhymes and nailing the (limited) point through the coffin well into the opposite end of the world. It seems like you're mind's pretty organized if it can hammer on that one point 10 rhyming lines. Or is it just that you'd forgotten you'd written the previous two each time?

auscot replying on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams 21 Dec 2004, 3:09 PM

Sorry, thought you were using it as an adjective.

Dovina on Internet Inspiration (Dovina) revised by jroday 21 Dec 2004, 3:08 PM

Thank you for reposting this and for the kind sentiment.

Dovina on Twin Forks by auscot 21 Dec 2004, 3:07 PM

Your best so far. Quite good. no comma after bring. "No longer will I look, without regret," is a bit clunky.

jroday replying on Mallard by richa 21 Dec 2004, 2:29 PM

Felicia you did'nt have to log in on me, but any Dovina go to www.leroy campbell.com and tell me what you think of my stick men. better yet my paintings.

blacksoul replying on Mallard by richa 21 Dec 2004, 2:23 PM

Dovina blacksoul is a rich little brat. he likes making comments like that until you start talking about them stick people he be painting

blacksoul on Internet Inspiration (Dovina) revised by jroday 21 Dec 2004, 2:09 PM

I'll give it another -10- because I know this man very well, and what he's going through. If it was me I don't think i could handle it the way he does, but I give him the utmost respect.

jroday on Magnetic Time by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 2:02 PM

Dovina I posted the poem he worte for you. this poem is wonderful that you wrote for him. the only thing is that he had a seizure today, and went into a coma. I will e-mail you. Felicia

Beyond_Dreams replying on Forgotten Strokes by Beyond_Dreams 21 Dec 2004, 1:52 PM

I had to edit it about the blank canvas part. Other wise you have to look past the "canvas" part of the poem. It's about a person depressed trying to fit in "palette decorated" her makeup "nightmarish dreams" gothic Her memories are of before with the evening dining and star lit sparkled eyes. That describes her old memories of joy. Manifested demons trying unworldly times.....nothing is going right. Her tears over flowing into the puddle she’s all alone.....

Dovina replying on Magnetic Time by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 1:46 PM

Thank you, too.

Dovina replying on Magnetic Time by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 1:45 PM

Thank you, Fraser.

Dovina on Forgotten Strokes by Beyond_Dreams 21 Dec 2004, 1:44 PM

A bit over the top. A blank canvas sits untouched because it's blank; unveiled, but we see it. Tears overflowing from what? Palette decorated nightmarish dreams, and starlit eyes - outside then. Still a haunting vision.

blacksoul on Magnetic Time by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 1:03 PM

That is so lovely.-10-

I think the second It's should be spelled out, for rhythmic purposes. Unless you're shouting it, then it's all clean in the wash.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 12:24 PM

Ah but the title of his poeme was "Vegetable Poeme", not "Vegetables Poeme". 'twould be folly indeede to expect more than one vegetable in a "Vegetable Poeme"... unless by "Vegetable" he means "Vegetable, as an abstract concept" :(

Dovina replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 11:59 AM

Math 10, Poetry 8

Yikes on Center Of The Universe by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 11:31 AM

I enjoyed this piece (esspecially the conclusion). 9

some deleted user replying on Math Poem by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 11:25 AM

Very good.