some deleted user
replying on PATIENCE by jroday
10 Jun 2004, 9:23 AM
at least someone else sees that half of the lyrics on this site aren't lyrics at all
This poem seems a little odd but it's interesting. This can be compared to how fragile life is. Good work.
everything above 3 and everything below, to infinity, is total bullshit. 10
I want to like this. Especially with the caryatids. Great word ,btw. Just too piecemeal for me. Show me more about the support structures.
I'm way off but, my mind went the filthy route first, but on a second read I thought it was about the practice of poetry. A daisy chain being ones older and of lesser quality poems. Damn. Sorry I missed the first cut too. 10 for your poem 6 for me being an idiot.
You are such a whore, who cares if you'd get paid for it.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on reflexion v.3 - Cannibalization and Twilight by Don-Quixote
10 Jun 2004, 3:30 AM
What did the cannibal do after dumping his girlfried?
Wiped his bum.
unicorns? really?
I get what you're trying to convey, but its not worded in a manner that gives me wood.
I love this poem. It's good for a laugh, and it's relatively truthful. Nice job!
Exactly, but I'd get paid, and it'd be a quality poem.
Now, I wouldn't say gibberish, exactly. I used these terms metaphorically, which is ironic when the whole thing is a metaphor itself.
I know! I was so proud of that!
horus8 might have written this poem about being drilled by Dean Cain while on X at a fabulous Dave Geffen pool party.