thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Apr 2004, 10:00 PM
A very wise Idea indeed.
First commet. Think it explained it all. Co-write. My Flavoring laced with there style and expression.
The hands that save you are the same ones that destroy you nice...
Wow, very strong, very intimidating. This isnt what I was expecting at all. This is either from the perspective of a poor, or homeless man/woman/child. Intense, short and to the point. i give it a 10
Wow, Very Very Very intense, strong wording. I really loved the way you wrote this, its so dark, and horrible. Great write
nah... mayber this poem just sucks... thanks for the vote
Nope.
Over all.. its different. I mean to say that its apart from your usual style of penning; its a good read never-the-less.
Blessed with eight.
Supple breasts being the mild start of gender morphing and drag queen anthesis?
Wonder why you'd post this under a fake look-alike of one of my pen-names... -shrug- I had assumed that such tricksy impostures are done in order to ridicule.. but whatever- aside from that, I likes it, I smokes it, I crave constant injections of it while waiting for perpetual IV drips. Blessed with nine.
Are all of your poems about paralyzed acorns?
The many wonders, sensations, and assorted smells of the almighty twat & its effect 'pon slithering snakes make for good readin anyday- really liked this stanza:
"My spent seed gumming up a future in you
Worshipped, your insight smells of old blood."
If I'm not mistaken, couldn't this be labeled a ghazal? Anyway, blessed with nine.
lol
dear God.......no.......
This poem is below your over-all writing ability, lil-furry-poofball.. did you regress? Cmon man, would you add some spice and atleast get the tip of my toes to fuckin sizzle?
Horus,
I agree. The buns are not totally bad but there certainly is quite a bit of room for improvement. Suggestions are welcome. Thanks.
Horus,
I agree. I'll need to give it somne more thought. Thanks.
SupremeDreamer
replying on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer
29 Apr 2004, 2:02 PM
Degrading women wasn't my goal or over-all intention with this piece, so injecting more misogynism would morph the poem from
"apathetic view on day to day life & being irritated with the mostly insipid nature of basic human activity"
into:
"women are just dirty cock teasers and greedy, jealous, power-hungry imperialists sucking the life out of men and other women, etc, etc."
To sum this up, I'm just not really interested in degrading or bashing women and going gung-ho anti-feminism or something- its not a question of being PC either, I'm just content not over-generalizing women; they come in many colors, ugly and pretty, like everything else.
Plus anyway, that sort of thing has been done a billion ways from sunday in an array of cultural overtones- its boring, and too fucking easy, but if thats what tickles your toes, then perhaps you should take a go at it.