thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Bottom half of a phone by That One
25 Apr 2004, 10:21 PM
A bit bland. Liven it up.
Pimple? Borderline, a Masterpiece
Oh How I've waited!
Scary
nice visuals
This is one of my first co-writes.
I believe you are right.
So?
I find no legitimate quarell between evolution and Christianity. Seems the proponents of both should stick to their own expertise.
The good teachers are hard to find.
Yes, Spock would have said "Beam me up, bitch, for I have much nerve-pinching to do."
This was a poem that I edited into another poem and there were acouple of comments that I did'nt feel had any value to the new poem and thus were deleted. :0)
As far as your other questions:
1) I don't think snakes came from mammals either but this is an allusion to the fact that we really don't know for sure (although its an obscure line I admit)
2) Yep, all the species that had the skills for survival did survive. This line refers to one that did not.
3) I wrote this after having a conversation with an extremely devout Christian woman who completely refused to acknowledge even the slightest possibility that evolution happened, despite the historical (read: fossil) evidence.
Here's to to the good folks who handed us the torch and the good folks like you who remember them. Salute!
We want authenticity these days. What ever happened to "All the world's a stage, and all of us goofballs actors"? Tell me to shup up, but I still see a lot of acting. And I sort of long for it to go away. Good thought.
How is it you have a bunch of "old votes" and no old comments? Anyway, I'm not rabid, but do like this. I didn't think snakes came from mamals though. Also, I think all the species had or have skills necessary for survival because they survived, at least for a while - picky, picky. Also the last line throws me. Who didn't believe?
You haven't explained anything. The part of the sentence that doesn't make any sense is how a memory could "reside" at someone's distate. Even writing those words makes me feel soiled.
Nope.
and all because I used "be happy". Tsk tsk
I should hope so, considering I wrote it. Let me clarify for you
"memories" is referring to the notes from the first line. I have this box of old letters, notes, pictures, etc- it's called my Memory Box. The other person in the poem tore these notes up, reducing them to shreds, which is where the "reduced" part comes in. "Distaste" refers to his displeasure.
Basically I'm saying that even though he physically tore the notes up, which were representations of my memories, he couldn't destroy the memories themselves and he wasn't entitled to keep control of them simply because he took out his emotions on them.
I developed an interest in girls which your flan like legs precluded you from joining in. Your devotion to the Englsh language, whilst standing you in good stead for long term employability as a clerk, did not allow you to develop any friendships or experience of fisting a girls tight anus.