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Fear of Garbage on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 11:01 AM
Alright, I get it. Love rhymes with above
some deleted user on Laundry by mindsigns 19 Apr 2004, 10:39 AM
~Cute~
some deleted user on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 10:29 AM
Sorry, but I made it only a quarter of the way through this choppy thing. Please try to be a little more concise.
some deleted user on Sport by MacFrantic 19 Apr 2004, 10:26 AM
I can only guess what you might be talking about. No vote.
some deleted user on The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi 19 Apr 2004, 10:22 AM
Dear Mr. Poe I liked The Raven better, more fluid somehow, but you've made fine try here with the same Lenore, and even brought a chuckle where the former did not.
zodiac on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 10:15 AM
These should be broken into the following categories: -'...knowing you're an angel up above.' -'...you're like an angel up above.' -'...blessed by/sent by the Lord above.' -[other objects above.] -[doesn't make any goddamn sense.]
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on stranger by francis nor capule 19 Apr 2004, 10:10 AM
Perhaps he has been playing Nethack, and decided to surround the protagonist with eels.
francis nor capule replying on stranger by francis nor capule 19 Apr 2004, 9:58 AM
i fell off my seat
Shardik replying on The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi 19 Apr 2004, 9:47 AM
He didn't, he skimmed it, and fired, you tit.
Shardik on The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi 19 Apr 2004, 9:46 AM
God, that was bad, long and bad.
some deleted user on 03/30/04 by Lifeboatman 19 Apr 2004, 9:45 AM
The first verse is good. The second verse is vague, but ok. comfort -> comforts. I think you could do without the last "Dear Diary . . ." Overall, a good effort.
Shardik replying on Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8 19 Apr 2004, 9:33 AM
If the whole poem was about a messaging service, and I assumed writing about a messaging service would be somehow exciting, I'd then be classifiably as lonely and pathetic as you, and I don't see that happening, it's actually about allpoetry.com thank you for your useless fodder and wasting my time with your wasted words. See, I use poemranker as a online journal and back up memory of sorts, so I really don't post these with any intentions outside of a need for copys. Have a lovely day.
ggawrysi replying on The Robin- A Parody by ggawrysi 19 Apr 2004, 9:27 AM
so much insight... i'm so happy that you took the time to read this poem and tell me what you think!
edpeterson on The Flame by Fire_is_cool 19 Apr 2004, 9:04 AM
better than smoke inhalation, which is more than i can say for many of the others.
Shuushin replying on stranger by francis nor capule 19 Apr 2004, 8:22 AM
need more roughage - it will help with your colons.
Shuushin replying on stranger by francis nor capule 19 Apr 2004, 8:21 AM
Oooo, oooo! Let me tell him!! Can I, Can I???
Dan garcia-Black on 03/30/04 by Lifeboatman 19 Apr 2004, 8:08 AM
Yeah, I know what you mean. I think you are capable of saying it better. But it stands at a '8' on its own. Thanks for not making it as long as my wordy verses.
edpeterson on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco 19 Apr 2004, 7:36 AM
it is especially difficult for a reader of lyrics to imagine the beat, the cant, the rhythm of a song, when it does not rhyme. but, even as a poem, i think this is very good.
edpeterson on Do You Like It by hotwire 19 Apr 2004, 7:31 AM
i can see it being a good song.
francis nor capule replying on stranger by francis nor capule 19 Apr 2004, 7:30 AM
OMG... i totally missed that. haven't drunk enough coffee... sorry