I couldn't be bothered to read most of your comment, since I couldn't be bothered to read most of your poeme. The only bit I did read was 'God doesn't watch with eyes he has not', and I only read that because it caught my eye as I was scanning through the guff. As for your earnest attack upon my list of special moves: you just don't get it, do you?

omfg... I never noticed that I took the name of a store... crap. Thanks for pointing that out - I'll fix that to... something... Once I think of it...

Bless you.. this attack on my piece relieves my desperate, depraved addiction for your brand of ranker spanking- its saltwater and arsenic injected straight into my jugular. But on to the dance which follows: In short, literal interpetation aside, I essentially said he can not know of all the sins a person commits daily unless he defines god as able to do so- AND THEN ALSO give him the power to know of all the "bad" things they do/think/unknowingly conspires to do, whether he wishes it or not. And as for god manifesting light after creating heaven on earth in the dark: How could he make light without some divine sense of "sight"? Even he would have to create a means to tell the difference between darkness and light to create them with the attributes that he had in mind in for them in his holy & sacred plans for the creation of Existence. If not, theres a good possibility god flipped on the light-switch to discover in supreme ironic chagrin that he didn't make earth a perfect sphere, but instead round with slight impressions/lumps dotting the surface! But since a deity of his perfection and power isn't able to make mistakes, he realizes that mountains are also a part of his plan!His extreme perfection caused him to manifest them without the need to be aware of it. Maybe thats why he is said to know of whats in store for everything and everyones destiny before it actually occurs... And why would Jesu have just those specific abilities, since in theory (in the sense that he is equal to a deity) able to manifest any ability that his divine imagination comes up with? It all seems silly. Plus the destinctions aren't a real factor since I'm attacking theism in general (transendent, all-powerfull being who created man and set forth sacred rules he must abide, etc. Every form of theism applying their own lil details is irrelevant, because all such religions are built with the same core attributes that define religious theism.) That is all- My feet have stopped their tapidy-tap-tap and have become still once again. I do hope you give me another brutal & potent fix soon in reply.

lol

you forgot the "E" on brown though...

you got it - thanks for reading it

Yes, it's obviously fictional. That's my point. PS- "Look beyond the surface" is a fucking laugh riot. Beyond this poem's surface is much, much more surface.

poor sod does fit you massive sod

thanks. I agree with you about interpretation. Mourning dead leaves? LOL never thought of that!! Interesting... Actually, I was flattering myself that the thunder was mourning my crushed dreams!! [along with the fallen leaves of course] Or maybe it is mourning all mankind's disappointments.... I guess I am raving a little bit today...