I notice you're in Cahouts too, tsk.

what a load of shit

Dark Angel, my plan has worked, the ugly bearded man, and my minions have sent me to control the worst list. I have won the bet. As I suspected.

I love it. I agree with Tranny. Marshmallow loses the fine wine flavor that permeates throughout the rest of the poem. Good one.

don't think you need doppelganger and reflection. 'Love yourself' at the best is a cliche, at worse a distraction. v1 fourth line doesn't make much sense. 'On a straight mirror you stretch the glass' is an interesting line I quite like.

nice descriptions, think it needs a main character if you are going to go into his psyche though with lines such as 'left to cling to his indignant assertion'. Like the line breaks too

675? Close enough I guess. blessed with 4. Oh, and not to be rude.. but your nick makes mine seem smashin, really- I can't keep from giggling everytime I read "new age poet" since the first thought that pops up in my head is: "whats that? virgin hippies meet MDMA+pantheism?" No offense intended, just being liberal with my opinion.

ITS A JOKE DUMMY

I like the way you get this poem to flow out of such long lines. The only pick is that it is a little too eclectic in the images it throws in rather than building up a central metaphor.

Your simple hopes of glamour & fame may never come true:o)

I love it. really, i do. 10.

well, not too bad, not the best you could have done though. Blessed with 8.

long time, no see- ive missed your works, and enjoyed this one- even though its pencrap to you. bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?) well anyway, heres an 8.

A wet firecracker in a dry turd.