I knew I'd hear from you eventually, Mr. "I come from a rich background of writers." What a joke. Your opinions ring as true as your "writing". The only thing that surprises me is this unprecedented instance of brevity. You should employ it more often.

haha .... no i love her u idiot...by provocative eyes i mean ..provocative in a sexy way ...not in a fist fight manner... but thanx for the comment

perhaps... 10

thanks.. but I think this poem really doesn't have to be perfected as I think of it as a crock of shit... and for bust seats, it was intentional but I also don't know what they are, sounded great, though, while I was writing the piece...

remember, this is not meant as an offense for the sexually active nor to the professionals who give sexual pleasure in exchange for currency... i've quite a lot of respect for both cases of human existense since I see love making as a very amiable past time and I have great respect to the people of the latter of both sex and all gender... still, I wish I would not hear myself speak these things... write it-- maybe...

Your tuners ear is more developed than mine. Grrrr.

thanks man. My confidence waxes and wanes faster than the sun and moon in their chase. (ok, so why wasn't THAT in my bag six hundred poems ago)?