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good poem, and sliver, can't you see that that was about the angels? i knew rigth away, open your eyes :P~

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good poem, 10

Your poems amuse me!!!!! Your lyrics are fab!!! I laugh at your humourous verse!!!!!!111 Twelve people I know could do better than that - But then none could do very much worse. You slag.

Would she type with her tongue? Her toes? Her nose?

overall pleasing in its malefic intent. my opinions, if you will permit me to suggest a few tweaks: spiral implies 'around', so, 'Twist a whimsied spiral down' would suffice. also, 'The hanging of a garden abounding with allure' is a clumsy phrase. make it leaner. [alluring and abundant, a hanging garden...or something] 'watch we' --tricksy inversion prickles me. 'It itself did engage'--again, a little awkward 'gametic knife'--the heart of the poem, succintly captured. bravo. good work.

mr pig?

actually, some here suck for the financial gain.

excuse me, but it should be "...[aint] got [no] arms." It's actually a good start to something (I can think of many more reasons why you/we all suck). And, well, it kinda rhymes - so it must be good.

There is no proven direct correlation between the possesion of arms and the quality of one's poetry.

A few bible quotes twisted around a metaphore for John Candy? Hmmmm let me think. Ouch that hurts, I'll just give you a 7 and go take some asprin.

Deeply felt emotion still swirling down there with the source of your tears. I especially like the 'slice of my heart' part (look! I'm a poet too!)yipee.

Reminds me somehow of ancient Greece, and toga's. It strikes me today since I just spent the morning hanging my crawling ivy across the ceiling of my living room. It seemed to flow fairly smoothly, 9.

OK mainly flows I think, and some nice material bit too slow though for the repetition to kick in gay is too easy a rhyme, and is far more loaded to meaning homosexual, which would mean your feathered foe was singing something like Y.M.C.A.