some deleted user
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
11 Jun 2003, 12:46 PM
Amazing job, Mr. Pig... the only word that comes even close to describing how I felt while reading this poem is "wow." Bravo.
and bare feet. (I'll send you my edit from last night, it obviously didn't reach you, stand by).
Naughty.
lol.
Good god you are a fucking spinner.
Great haiku! 10!
I believe you need to muster your nude form back to the typing table, there are some serious typos and horrible flaws in this poem, but the sentiment was maintained, somehow.
Do you mean you like it except the cliche in the last line or do you mean keep it? I'm very confused!
No, because your sheets are covered in poop, not blood.
Nice poem.
Long. Mr. Soderstrom, I am sorry to say, your poem is entirely too long. Also, I agree with Bachus. However, I don't even think I could write THAT much poetry, good, bad or otherwise, so I give you a 5 (I suspect that it took that many minutes to type). Try shortening it, and using less quotes and hypens.
i like that..it's eye cathing
not sure i am understanding you at all!!?
I don't get the title.
Yu should almost never use the word "just". it is seldom necessary and it musddies up meaning bu softening the impact of your verb. perhaps "to" would be an apt replacement.
sing-song
haven't