<{Baba^Yaga}>
on Strong by -vz18-
28 May 2003, 11:00 AM
hork.
It's rock hard, truly.
Kraute
horus8
replying on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8
28 May 2003, 9:27 AM
Maybe if you put a bowl of oatmeal in front of you while you read it you'd not notice how microscopic your comment is.
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GQT on this whimsical day this great ideal country day, milkshakes, ufos, caves to explore. YES! my friend we are pirates. PIRATES! or our we Greek gods today? what day is today? JESUS! WHERE ARE MY CLOTHES, AND WHO IN THE FUCK ARE YOU? SECURITY! 10
hyperbole
lingerie
lol.
The last stanza and 3/4 I found compelling and rich in verse. Good work my boy ! 8
I have a soft spot for this, well done.
Alas so true my tortured soul.
How vulgar, you lout !
Oh my
OMG I love it! I hope you don't mind if I put this in my little book of 'keepers.' I'll be reading more of your work. :)
Are you saying that:
lil cindy lu who =df
any x which satisfies the predicate (
x has pigtails &
x has freckles &
there is some y and some z such that (
y is female &
y begat x &
z is male &
z is married to y &
~(z begat x) &
x is the toy of z &
z warns x 'don't tell' &
the hands of z are on the body of x &
the mouth of z is on the face of x)) &
there is some y such that (
x loved y &
for all z (
~(y=z) ->
(x loved z -> x loved z later than x loved y)) &
~(y loved x)) &
x has crinolines starched in circles holding poodle skirts wide &
for all y (
(y is Elvis at Heartbreak Hotel v
y is 'I Like Ike' v
y is polio shots) ->
x swoons over y) &
there is some y and some z such that (
y is female &
y begat x &
z is male &
z is married to y &
~(z begat x) &
x smells the stench of z &
the arms of z bind down x &
x is big now &
z cannot get x again) &
x tumbles into love, a dozen times, maybe more &
there is some y such that (
y is a world &
y is around x &
for all z (
(z is a world & z is around x) -> z=y) &
y is changing as Joan Baez sings out, Diamonds and Rust &
the Washington Wall wept, too many lives late) &
x is riding roughened seas &
the boat of x is battened down &
x is facing the storms &
x is trembling inside &
there is rain on the face of x &
~(x is turning back)
for all y
~there is some y such that (
y is hungry and wanting &
y is at home in the skin of x) &
there is some y and some z such that (
y is a ghost &
z is a ghost &
~(y=z) &
y still lingers &
z is routed out) &
x has hands in a fist &
x has arms opened wide)
Bingo.
I'm glad to have to vote again. If I'm reading this right, it is positioned as a reversal of events.
I must give you back your golden Q-Tip award for this.
The awards I ordered didn't make it through the firefight.