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some deleted user on Writer's Block by Miggy 26 Apr 2003, 7:37 PM
I think this one's better than overdose
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose 26 Apr 2003, 7:33 PM
That's OK! Poemeranker is a great place to share your work and learn more about poemes! It's also a great place to meet other Christians! At poemeranker we welcome poetes from all walks of life! We've even got one poete who's a truck driver! I think his name is INTRANSIT. Obviously he's barely literate, and probably doesn't even know what a kidney is. But that doesn't matter. There's no judgment here. Have a great time at poemeranker!
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig 26 Apr 2003, 7:25 PM
spazmo
BleedingRose on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig 26 Apr 2003, 6:54 PM
I love it! i think ill jot this one down in my little book. Though i cant give it a perfect score because of the whole haiku problem which others have already pointed out . but id love to see a revised edition!
Bachus on ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~ 26 Apr 2003, 4:51 PM
Well, first off, try not to write it down. Secondly, go to Cancun with the rest of your type and do a swan dive from the motel 6's roof into the banquet table's fruit salad. What do you do if a cantalope wedge gets stuck in your vagina? Start a new religion.
Bachus on Stoner Rant#1-Mnkypo's razor by Crakyamuni 26 Apr 2003, 4:47 PM
Not if the artist has the address of the purchasers home. Then he could break in with his palette and paint mustaches everywhere.
horus8 on Dumbfounded, dumbfucked by Bane 26 Apr 2003, 3:43 PM
The title's dumb, the rest is chipper.
horus8 on Scarlet Bridge by marvelis 26 Apr 2003, 3:39 PM
You forgot a period, and spelled revenge wrong. Unless you are a pirate then it's Arghgggg REvanGE is mine me harty!
horus8 on PLAYMOBIL by Garrett S Sexton 26 Apr 2003, 3:34 PM
Tidy.
horus8 on my so called life by nolan 26 Apr 2003, 3:29 PM
Whatever Corky.
horus8 on Im innocent by Horus9 26 Apr 2003, 3:23 PM
I would go grab a couple of my Good Robert Frost collections of poetry and fire some off at you, but I've already been vomiting all night. Besides, I haven't the slightest clue as to what or who in the fuck you are talking about in the slightest. Good day, SIR!
AuntyM on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 26 Apr 2003, 2:41 PM
I've read alot of your work, but I think this is quite ingenious. Hats off, my friend!
anitawit on Joshua by Bachus 26 Apr 2003, 2:03 PM
Beautiful, almost cried.
anitawit on Joshua by Bachus 26 Apr 2003, 2:01 PM
Beautiful.
Fear of Garbage on Dumbfounded, dumbfucked by Bane 26 Apr 2003, 1:49 PM
you've got potential. keep going
Fear of Garbage on Scarlet Bridge by marvelis 26 Apr 2003, 1:44 PM
wow. it souds like you're just doing this for the hell of a rhyme. a very bad rhyme.
i like the first two lines and the last sort of ironic
anitawit replying on Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit 26 Apr 2003, 1:40 PM
'(a) myriad' is right, thanks
anitawit replying on Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit 26 Apr 2003, 1:37 PM
Don't have no wings like some - got to use clouds; ain't creativity, only necessity.
anitawit replying on I Speak of Expanses by anitawit 26 Apr 2003, 1:30 PM
Yes, yes, yes. Definitely increases the sense of expansion, may be I'll bring myself to lose the last line soon.