some deleted user
on Writer's Block by Miggy
26 Apr 2003, 7:37 PM
I think this one's better than overdose
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spazmo
I love it! i think ill jot this one down in my little book. Though i cant give it a perfect score because of the whole haiku problem which others have already pointed out . but id love to see a revised edition!
Well, first off, try not to write it down.
Secondly, go to Cancun with the rest of your type and do a swan dive from the motel 6's roof into the banquet table's fruit salad. What do you do if a cantalope wedge gets stuck in your vagina? Start a new religion.
Not if the artist has the address of the purchasers home. Then he could break in with his palette and paint mustaches everywhere.
The title's dumb, the rest is chipper.
You forgot a period, and spelled revenge wrong. Unless you are a pirate then it's Arghgggg REvanGE is mine me harty!
Tidy.
Whatever Corky.
I would go grab a couple of my Good Robert Frost collections of poetry and fire some off at you, but I've already been vomiting all night. Besides, I haven't the slightest clue as to what or who in the fuck you are talking about in the slightest. Good day, SIR!
I've read alot of your work, but I think this is quite ingenious. Hats off, my friend!
you've got potential. keep going
wow. it souds like you're just doing this for the hell of a rhyme. a very bad rhyme.
i like the first two lines and the last
sort of ironic
'(a) myriad' is right, thanks
Don't have no wings like some - got to use clouds; ain't creativity, only necessity.
Yes, yes, yes. Definitely increases the sense of expansion, may be I'll bring myself to lose the last line soon.